Autumn Kimono
A six word poem2 total reviews
Comment from RodG
Using six words, be creative and original. Well, you have been. I don't usually think of visualizing a breeze, but if I did in Autumn, it would be amber. And your metaphor for those colored leaves is perfect--a kimono. Nice! Rod
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Using six words, be creative and original. Well, you have been. I don't usually think of visualizing a breeze, but if I did in Autumn, it would be amber. And your metaphor for those colored leaves is perfect--a kimono. Nice! Rod
Comment Written 06-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Thanks so very much Rod for your lovely comments and review!
Comment from Julie Helms
This is a lovely depiction, with Japanese flair, to draw a picture of Fall. It incorporates several senses, bringing the reader into the scene, become a part of it.
A nicely done entry for the prompt!
Julie
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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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This is a lovely depiction, with Japanese flair, to draw a picture of Fall. It incorporates several senses, bringing the reader into the scene, become a part of it.
A nicely done entry for the prompt!
Julie
:-)
Comment Written 06-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Thanks so very much Julie! Your review is much appreciated!