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Looking at the beauty of a spider's web
2 total reviews
Comment from
Pam Lonsdale
This is a fine Nonet about nature's spider webs - they really are fine spun labyrinths they can stand up to anything Nature throws at them.
In a perfect Nonet, is it supposed to resemble an upside down triangle. Someone here told me once that the actual visual is important too. Your lines are long in places for that.
I like the poem, just wanted to mention that in case there's something in the "rules" that suggest it.
Good luck, Kahlani:-)
Pam
Comment Written 06-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
Oh, thank you, Pam. I'm new to this site and trying out different poem styles. Any feedback is welcome.
Comment from
Dolly'sPoems
Did you know that spiders sometimes weave their webs to show off their designs? Well it is all true, they are natural artists. I enjoyed your nonet, a divine tapestry of words, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
Coming from a master of words, I sincerely thank you, Dolly.
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