The 5-K Meat.
Started on a dead end street...5 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Haha! I think you've imaginatively captured this scene in your zombie 5-7-5. It's scary and humorous and not too blood-thirsty for my sensitive disposition:)) Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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Haha! I think you've imaginatively captured this scene in your zombie 5-7-5. It's scary and humorous and not too blood-thirsty for my sensitive disposition:)) Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 07-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much for this nice review.. .it's always great to hear from you. :)
Comment from royowen
I love this 5/7/5, it is a great modern haiku, it is beautifully written my friend, an exceptionally written post, that last line is a great satori line, and a worthy entry in this 5/7/5 contest, good luck, well done blessings Roy
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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I love this 5/7/5, it is a great modern haiku, it is beautifully written my friend, an exceptionally written post, that last line is a great satori line, and a worthy entry in this 5/7/5 contest, good luck, well done blessings Roy
Comment Written 07-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Thanks so much, l appreciate this great review. Have a wonderful evening. :)
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That makes sense
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
What a fun poem! I love the word choices with "fast food" and the idea of zombies participating in a 5-K - so funny! The light-hearted tone really brings a smile. It's fun to picture the chaotic scene of zombies trying to keep up with the runners.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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What a fun poem! I love the word choices with "fast food" and the idea of zombies participating in a 5-K - so funny! The light-hearted tone really brings a smile. It's fun to picture the chaotic scene of zombies trying to keep up with the runners.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Thank you for this great review, it means a lot to me. :)
Comment from Kahlani
Thank you for giving me a good laugh. What a hilarious photograph! It depicts the poem so well. Although zombies aren't my favorite topic, I enjoyed this one. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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Thank you for giving me a good laugh. What a hilarious photograph! It depicts the poem so well. Although zombies aren't my favorite topic, I enjoyed this one. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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Thanks so much for reading my poem. If l may, could l ask why you gave me 4 stars? I truly am interested to know what could be improved about it, it's the way l learn. Thanks ahead of time for any suggestions you might have. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, this is really funny and you made me laugh here as the zombies joined the race and the food ran even faster! Ha ha ha, a fun post, love Dolly x x x x
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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Ha ha ha, this is really funny and you made me laugh here as the zombies joined the race and the food ran even faster! Ha ha ha, a fun post, love Dolly x x x x
Comment Written 06-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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Thank you for this fun review, it's so kind of you. :)