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Sleep

1:30 in the morning

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Comment from Begin Again
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Perfect! Explains why I always find myself at the computer around 3AM unable to sleep because my brain has been wrestling with life or a story. Well done!
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2024

Comment from Rachelle Allen
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Hahahaha. This is hilarious.

There used to be a cartoon in which one of the characters - and these were all kids - had a "Closet Full of Anxieties" that would open every night as he was in bed, trying to fall asleep. This poem just evoked that hilarious comic strip. (My favorite one was the night the school librarian visited him to announce that he had a fine in the thousands for a book he hadn't returned since Kindergarten.)

Good luck in the polls with this adorable Acrostic Poem!! xoxox

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2024

Comment from talented150
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I enjoyed your poem very much. Your picture was hilarious, indicating the way you felt when you went to sleep. I'm sure you are a great person and not the self-deprecating person you portrayed. But the humor was great!

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2024