Becoming
What it's like becoming a zombie.2 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
What a hauntingly beautiful poem! Your word choices are perfect. I loved "confused eyes wander". I could feel the zombies confusion. The last line, "Lost, still I hunger" does a wonderful job of showing what's on the mind of this zombie! You've created a zombie character in just a few words--great work! And congrats on your first post! It's a strong one!
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What a hauntingly beautiful poem! Your word choices are perfect. I loved "confused eyes wander". I could feel the zombies confusion. The last line, "Lost, still I hunger" does a wonderful job of showing what's on the mind of this zombie! You've created a zombie character in just a few words--great work! And congrats on your first post! It's a strong one!
Comment Written 05-Oct-2024
Comment from jessizero
Congratulations on your first milestone post! I enjoyed your poem. You seem to have gotten the syllable counts right, and your topic was perfect. I loved the line "Lost, still I hunger." Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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Congratulations on your first milestone post! I enjoyed your poem. You seem to have gotten the syllable counts right, and your topic was perfect. I loved the line "Lost, still I hunger." Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2024
