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Zombies plight.

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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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I love this! The difference between walking with the dead and your desire to be in bed is so funny. Your word choics are excellent and I had no idea where this was going until that final surprise line. Great job!

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
    Thank you so much.
Comment from jessizero
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I think this poem (and author's notes) definitely evoked an "EEK!" feeling. You also got the syllable counts right. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
    Thank you so much.