Comment from
Julie G1
Well written. The overall imagery was enhanced by the choice of graphic, to convey the poet's seasonal theme. Worked very well for this reader. Always keep on writing, very skillful verse.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2024
Comment from
Gunner Lil
What a neat picture used for this poem.
You nailed the 5-7-5 requirement for the contest.
An easy read with a good pace and flow/
Good luck and thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2024