Love's Twin Flames
where desire flames burn within6 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
I appreciated this poem for the 5-7-5 writing prompt. It looks like you got the syllable counts right, and your poem had a blazing feel to it. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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I appreciated this poem for the 5-7-5 writing prompt. It looks like you got the syllable counts right, and your poem had a blazing feel to it. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2024
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Whoa! Hubba, hubba, Mystery Contestant! Look at the sexy, spicy masterpiece you have penned for your contest entry! It sizzles with both romance and lust. Even the artwork you chose is alluring. Good luck in the polls! xoxox
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Whoa! Hubba, hubba, Mystery Contestant! Look at the sexy, spicy masterpiece you have penned for your contest entry! It sizzles with both romance and lust. Even the artwork you chose is alluring. Good luck in the polls! xoxox
Comment Written 05-Oct-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The flame of passion is alive and kicking in this post and I enjoyed the heat of the moment as these two souls embrace, a fine 5-7-5 for the contest, love Dolly x
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The flame of passion is alive and kicking in this post and I enjoyed the heat of the moment as these two souls embrace, a fine 5-7-5 for the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-Oct-2024
Comment from Nicki.B
Ooh this is a hot and spicy poem in all the good ways! Desires burning, I love that. Usually an occuramce more so in the honeymoon period lol! Excellent 5-7-5, best of luck in the contest!
Best Wishes
Nicki
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Ooh this is a hot and spicy poem in all the good ways! Desires burning, I love that. Usually an occuramce more so in the honeymoon period lol! Excellent 5-7-5, best of luck in the contest!
Best Wishes
Nicki
Comment Written 04-Oct-2024
Comment from Sarah Probe 1
Beautiful poem full of love and passion, this feels like a night on fire between dancing lovers, and various scenes are visualised through such a few words, this is also making your poem intriguing and enchanting at the same time,
Well done :)
Sarah
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Beautiful poem full of love and passion, this feels like a night on fire between dancing lovers, and various scenes are visualised through such a few words, this is also making your poem intriguing and enchanting at the same time,
Well done :)
Sarah
Comment Written 04-Oct-2024
Comment from Janet Foor
A de"light"ful 5/7/5 poem for the writing prompt. You have captured "Loves Twin Flames" beautifully in this short poem. Great artwork and presentation as well.
Blessings and good luck.
Janet
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A de"light"ful 5/7/5 poem for the writing prompt. You have captured "Loves Twin Flames" beautifully in this short poem. Great artwork and presentation as well.
Blessings and good luck.
Janet
Comment Written 04-Oct-2024