Melting Sun
Twilight a beautiful time.3 total reviews
Comment from Rachelle Allen
This one seems more like a genuine haiku to me because it evoked that feeling I get with "the real deal." I felt peacefulness and as if I'm drifting on air and loving it.
Even your gorgeous picture was perfect here.
I very much enjoyed this entry, Mystery Contestant. I would not be surprised to see you in the Winner's Circle! Good luck. xo
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2024
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This one seems more like a genuine haiku to me because it evoked that feeling I get with "the real deal." I felt peacefulness and as if I'm drifting on air and loving it.
Even your gorgeous picture was perfect here.
I very much enjoyed this entry, Mystery Contestant. I would not be surprised to see you in the Winner's Circle! Good luck. xo
Comment Written 05-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2024
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Thank you for the read and encouraging comments. Much appreciated.
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Truly my pleasure! xo
Comment from Sarah Probe 1
Lovely Haiku poem, a lot of imagery and a beautiful description of the night falling and the sun disappearing in the background of a multicoloured landscape, this was very inspirational, i hope you win the contest,
Sarah
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Lovely Haiku poem, a lot of imagery and a beautiful description of the night falling and the sun disappearing in the background of a multicoloured landscape, this was very inspirational, i hope you win the contest,
Sarah
Comment Written 04-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much for your kind wish. Appreciated.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
What a beautiful picture of a sunset that you share here! The imagery of the "golden sun melting" creates such a warm picture. And I love how you capture the transition from day to night with the "sky blushes purple and red." Keep painting those gorgeous scenes with your words!
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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What a beautiful picture of a sunset that you share here! The imagery of the "golden sun melting" creates such a warm picture. And I love how you capture the transition from day to night with the "sky blushes purple and red." Keep painting those gorgeous scenes with your words!
Comment Written 04-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much for the encouraging comments.