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Zephyr

A soft breeze ruffles the surface of a small lake.

2 total reviews 
Comment from shad blunt
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Love haiku poetry, and love this poem. Im currently exploring on the tanka style of this 57577 sylables , writing in nature to tell the story in 31 sylables. Love the poem, love all japanese styles. BONSAI

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
    Thank you, Shad.
Comment from zanya
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This is a lovely image created here in this 5/7/5 -these well chosen words create a sense of calm and and serenity - and with a superb visual to illustrate.

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
    Thank you, Zanya.