2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from Bill Schott
This haiku, Reading on the Ledge, has the proper formatting and creates the scene of comfort reading in a still calm environment.
I am wondering if the phrase "ledge of night" is a combination of "edge of night" and "ledge at night".
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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This haiku, Reading on the Ledge, has the proper formatting and creates the scene of comfort reading in a still calm environment.
I am wondering if the phrase "ledge of night" is a combination of "edge of night" and "ledge at night".
Comment Written 08-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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I thought she was on a ledge but edge sounds better.
Thank you very much, Bill
Gypsy 😊
Comment from lyenochka
With your friends the moon and the sea
and all your late night friends on Fanstory!
A lovely poem and we are never completely alone as we have the Lord and we have so many things to read!
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2024
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With your friends the moon and the sea
and all your late night friends on Fanstory!
A lovely poem and we are never completely alone as we have the Lord and we have so many things to read!
Comment Written 05-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2024
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Hehe... yes I have many late night friends... usually in other countries.
Thank you very much, big sister ❤️
Marival 😊
Comment from Katiemae1977
Outstanding mood piece Gypsy. This one0 really did it for me. I love the ending "with my friends, the moon and sea" just the way it's written gives it so much depth.
Thoroughly enjoyed!
Luv&stuff
Katherine
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Outstanding mood piece Gypsy. This one0 really did it for me. I love the ending "with my friends, the moon and sea" just the way it's written gives it so much depth.
Thoroughly enjoyed!
Luv&stuff
Katherine
Comment Written 04-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Katherine, I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words. May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs 😊
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You're welcome and thank you for the Gypsy hugs. Keep them coming!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I'm wondering if you're reading silently or reading out loud to your friend, the moon and sea. I'm sure they'd like to hear the poems. Thank you for sharing this beautiful presentation with us.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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I'm wondering if you're reading silently or reading out loud to your friend, the moon and sea. I'm sure they'd like to hear the poems. Thank you for sharing this beautiful presentation with us.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara, May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
Beautiful words that I can relate to again. Many of my writings are done as I sit on the ledge of my window that looks out at the ocean.Thise times I feel alone, save for the moon and sea. I like your allusions to t g em bring friends, and they have been to me all my life.
Very nostalgic in my eyes.
RJ
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Beautiful words that I can relate to again. Many of my writings are done as I sit on the ledge of my window that looks out at the ocean.Thise times I feel alone, save for the moon and sea. I like your allusions to t g em bring friends, and they have been to me all my life.
Very nostalgic in my eyes.
RJ
Comment Written 03-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ. May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from shelley kaye
cool haiku - love reading - though not on the ledge of anything lol
suggestion: make it a 4-liner?
with "reading" on the first line spaced out
eh... just a thought lol
a great haiku with cool imagery and pics and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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cool haiku - love reading - though not on the ledge of anything lol
suggestion: make it a 4-liner?
with "reading" on the first line spaced out
eh... just a thought lol
a great haiku with cool imagery and pics and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 03-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley. I like it the way it is but thank you for the suggestion.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Teri7
Gypsy, This is another very beautiful and very well written short haiku. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the artwork you chose. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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Gypsy, This is another very beautiful and very well written short haiku. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the artwork you chose. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 03-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Teri
Gypsy 😊
Comment from royowen
I love that line, 'Reading on the ledge of light' the darkness tends to be restful however there can be elements that like darkness lurking and waiting, beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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I love that line, 'Reading on the ledge of light' the darkness tends to be restful however there can be elements that like darkness lurking and waiting, beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 03-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Roy
Gypsy 😊
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