Jor-el
Why do politicians get a bad Press?2 total reviews
Comment from Julie Helms
Such a tale of deception! And what a surprise....it's tied to a politician!
This is a scary idea...is it in our future?
***The scanner read my brain waves. Jor-el flashed on the screen. I pressed the "confirm" button.***
At least they let you confirm the thought....
Just a few suggestions:
ageing population.
(aging)
When I came to I realised I was
(When I came to, I ...)
A great entry for the prompt!
Julie
:-)
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Such a tale of deception! And what a surprise....it's tied to a politician!
This is a scary idea...is it in our future?
***The scanner read my brain waves. Jor-el flashed on the screen. I pressed the "confirm" button.***
At least they let you confirm the thought....
Just a few suggestions:
ageing population.
(aging)
When I came to I realised I was
(When I came to, I ...)
A great entry for the prompt!
Julie
:-)
Comment Written 03-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Many thanks, Julie.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I really enjoyed your writing! The blend of science fiction with political commentary is terrific. I loved how you created a sense of desperation in the face of impending doom. The reveal of betrayal adds a thrilling layer to the story! Keep up the fantastic work!
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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I really enjoyed your writing! The blend of science fiction with political commentary is terrific. I loved how you created a sense of desperation in the face of impending doom. The reveal of betrayal adds a thrilling layer to the story! Keep up the fantastic work!
Comment Written 03-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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So kind, Michael. Thanks.