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2024 Gypsy's Haiku

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Comment from lyenochka
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You make it sound so romantic, like the sun proposing to the moon. And it is beautiful sight - one I didn't see in person. We were going to see it this year but so many things got in the way and we couldn't get reservations.

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 05-Oct-2024
    Thank you very much, big sister ❤️ I would like to see it from Hawaii but I can't afford it.

    Marival 😊
reply by lyenochka on 05-Oct-2024
    I think it's rare there. We were planning to go to Texas this past spring but it didn't happen.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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It surely did. Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. I always enjoy reading your beautiful poetry and viewing the presentation. I feel honored you share your talent with us.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
    Thank you very much, Barbara

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
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Your pictures or images are always very stunning with great imagery and depth. This one is no exception, it captures all the essential features in visual and poetic display. Very nice, well done.
RJ

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
    Thank you very much, RJ

    Gypsy 😊
reply by RJ Heritage on 03-Oct-2024
    You're welcome
    RJ
Comment from l.raven
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Hi Marival, so very true my sweet friend...
I don't think a lot of people really know
about all the wonders of the world...or
the universe...what an amazing sight...

I love your poem sweet girl...and I love your
pictures...very nicely written...Love Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
    Thank you very much, Linda. Is good to hear from you.

    Marival xoxo

reply by l.raven on 03-Oct-2024
    your so welcome Marival...
    so good to see you too...I hope
    you are doing well..

    your so very welcome my sweet friend...love xxoo 🤗❤️🌼🙏
Comment from shelley kaye
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fyi - you forgot the end code for the url in your notes lol

a great two-line haiku
you could also say...
"the sun
put a ring
on the moon"
LOL!

nice work - thank you for sharing!
shelley :)

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
    Thank you very much,

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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Your writing in just a few words creates such a wonderful visual of the solar eclipse. I love the phrase "a ring of fire" - so powerful. You manage to share the intensity of the eclipse as well as teh beauty. Great job!

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
    Thank you very much, Michael

    Gypsy 😊