Convicted for Nothing
You pay the price for nothing2 total reviews
Comment from Ang Tang
This is good for a beginner. There are a lot of little grammar errors I'd fix and subtle changes I'd make to improve it. For example, instead of "I devote my time, my heart and soul," I'd say "I devote my time, my heart, and MY SOUL"
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This is good for a beginner. There are a lot of little grammar errors I'd fix and subtle changes I'd make to improve it. For example, instead of "I devote my time, my heart and soul," I'd say "I devote my time, my heart, and MY SOUL"
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
Comment from NanaGaye
A very moving and sad poem. Picture you choose is perfect. The rhyming is excellent. I must say I do like poems that rhyme, All the best to you and keep writing
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A very moving and sad poem. Picture you choose is perfect. The rhyming is excellent. I must say I do like poems that rhyme, All the best to you and keep writing
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024