Reviews from

2024 Gypsy's Haiku

Viewing comments for Chapter 214 "Fancy Squirrel"
x

7 total reviews 
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

I'm feeling sorry for that poor little mouse. I guess that's all he/she has to wear. This is a fun poem, and I enjoyed reading. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
    Thank you very much, Barbara

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Hahaha. In the show Sex and the City, the girl who's the fashionista once referred to a squirrel as "a rat with a much cuter outfit." It's like lady bugs. Without that red color and black spots, they're just beetles. Xo

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
    Thank you very much, Rachelle

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from lyenochka
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Lol. I don't think that the squirrel should make fun of the rat for wearing last year's coat. After all, as long as he is warm and able to move fast in all the hard work he does, it's perfect.

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2024

reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
    Thank you very much, big sister.

    Marival ❤️ 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

I think the lesson here is never look down or belittle anyone who might not be as privileged as you. This is a great example for all of us to follow. Thank you for sharing. Ha b exa great night.
RJ

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2024

reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
    Thank you very much, RJ

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from shelley kaye
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

heh cute little rodent haiku
good imagery and smooth flow
with a great satori...

thank you for sharing
shelley :)
.......................................

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2024

reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
    Thank you very much, Shelley

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Irresistible! Magical images, especially that of the rat, and an excellent verse uniting the two, albeit with a little competitiveness from the squirrel showing off her finery! Love the humour! Thanks, Gypsy. Debbie

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2024

reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
    Thank you very much, Debbie

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from jessizero
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

I will be the first to admit that I do not really understand haiku. I did, however, enjoy this one. It was fun and funny. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2024

reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
    Thank you very much, Jessi

    Gypsy 😊