Comment from
Debbie D'Arcy
haha! I like this because it describes in modern day speak an actual relationship that will not be allowed to live again. The visual too is fun and not as disgustingly blood-thirsty as the rest!! Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 02-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
Comment from
Michael Ludwinder
What a fun and clever take on the idea of ghosting! I love how you take the idea of "ghosting" and make it literal. haha. Your poem flows nicely which makes it such an enjoyable read. Great job!
Comment Written 30-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
Comment from
papa55mike
Oh, it's zombie season again. It's time for Alice to reappear and kick some butt. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 30-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024