The Ballad of Cain
Brother Cain being Cain.3 total reviews
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
I am reviewing this poem as is but not as a club writing prompt entry since it did not follow the guidelines for the Magic 9 poem. This poem told the story of Cain and Abel is detail and was easy to read with good flow to the words and well-presented rhymes. Nice job on this poem.
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I am reviewing this poem as is but not as a club writing prompt entry since it did not follow the guidelines for the Magic 9 poem. This poem told the story of Cain and Abel is detail and was easy to read with good flow to the words and well-presented rhymes. Nice job on this poem.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2024
Comment from Begin Again
From the beginning, when the first sins were learned, it has been our fate to bear the price and to fight the battle against it. Your poem delivers that thought very well.
Smiles, Carol
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From the beginning, when the first sins were learned, it has been our fate to bear the price and to fight the battle against it. Your poem delivers that thought very well.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 30-Sep-2024
Comment from papa55mike
The curse spread to the sons and will continue until the return of our Savior. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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The curse spread to the sons and will continue until the return of our Savior. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 30-Sep-2024