2024 Japanese Poetry
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7 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
whew! I might need a colder cup of iced tea here... been a while since a short form painted such a heated vision!! Well done, my lady, absolutely love the use of 'rose' to aid in your sensual crafting!! Thanx so much for sharing! :-) Yvette
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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whew! I might need a colder cup of iced tea here... been a while since a short form painted such a heated vision!! Well done, my lady, absolutely love the use of 'rose' to aid in your sensual crafting!! Thanx so much for sharing! :-) Yvette
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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LoL
Thank you very much, Yvette
Gypsy 😊
Comment from dovemarie
HI gypsy, Wonderful pictures of a musk-scented flower, I could almost taste, smell and feel the erotic feeling between these two lovers, the poem made me feel very passionate. dove
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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HI gypsy, Wonderful pictures of a musk-scented flower, I could almost taste, smell and feel the erotic feeling between these two lovers, the poem made me feel very passionate. dove
Comment Written 30-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Dove
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
Beautifully presented verses that speak of passionate and perhaps romantic love. Your images are very sensual and draw my eyes and mind to recollections of my own love encounters. Thanks for sharing
RJ
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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Beautifully presented verses that speak of passionate and perhaps romantic love. Your images are very sensual and draw my eyes and mind to recollections of my own love encounters. Thanks for sharing
RJ
Comment Written 29-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ
Gypsy hugs 😊
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You're welcome
RJ
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I have a feeling there's more to remember than the piercing musk scent and the rose. LOl This poem is ever sensual. I enjoyed reading. Once again, your presentation is above all.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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I have a feeling there's more to remember than the piercing musk scent and the rose. LOl This poem is ever sensual. I enjoyed reading. Once again, your presentation is above all.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from shelley kaye
cool last line! wasn't expecting that...
i liked the middle lines in yellow and grey
makes the body and soul stand out
great gogyohka with good imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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cool last line! wasn't expecting that...
i liked the middle lines in yellow and grey
makes the body and soul stand out
great gogyohka with good imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 29-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from jessizero
This poem was sensual without being graphic, and I think you did a wonderful job with the gogyohka format. I also liked your formatting. It was lovely. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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This poem was sensual without being graphic, and I think you did a wonderful job with the gogyohka format. I also liked your formatting. It was lovely. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Jessi
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from patcelaw
This is very interesting and I very much enjoyed listening to it. It flows very well when it is read aloud. Your presentation is beautiful. I wish you a very good day. Had a very good week. Patricia.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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This is very interesting and I very much enjoyed listening to it. It flows very well when it is read aloud. Your presentation is beautiful. I wish you a very good day. Had a very good week. Patricia.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Patricia
Gypsy hugs 😊