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Off and On Rhyme6 total reviews
Comment from BermyBye50
Shirley,
Congrats on winning the Off and On rhyme Contest. This is a creative and apropos entry with the theme of teacher instructing her students in learning to write poetry. The last line perfectly expresses the one students exasperation in not completing the task.
All the best,
Eugene
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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Shirley,
Congrats on winning the Off and On rhyme Contest. This is a creative and apropos entry with the theme of teacher instructing her students in learning to write poetry. The last line perfectly expresses the one students exasperation in not completing the task.
All the best,
Eugene
Comment Written 03-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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Aw, thank you Eugene. It was a close run contest. I thought we were going to tie! Your poem was certainly worthy of winning. Thank you so much for the six. I sincerely appreciate it :)
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Congratulations Shirley! Another win, I'm impressed! This skilfully fulfils the 'off and on rhyme' prompt with some lovely, imaginative dialogue between teacher and student, complete with humorous conclusion. A pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing. Debbie xx
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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Congratulations Shirley! Another win, I'm impressed! This skilfully fulfils the 'off and on rhyme' prompt with some lovely, imaginative dialogue between teacher and student, complete with humorous conclusion. A pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing. Debbie xx
Comment Written 30-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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Ah, thank you Debbie x
Comment from zanya
Yes an interesting angle on the Off and On rhyme poetry contest giving an insight into creativity and how it might manifest in our lives - our Muse many not oblige when we want it too!
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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Yes an interesting angle on the Off and On rhyme poetry contest giving an insight into creativity and how it might manifest in our lives - our Muse many not oblige when we want it too!
Comment Written 29-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Zanya.
Comment from F. William Lester
I laughed at the image you described, because I remember those days (eons ago) and my inability to fill a page with a single word. Nicely done.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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I laughed at the image you described, because I remember those days (eons ago) and my inability to fill a page with a single word. Nicely done.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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Thank you :) :)
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You're very welcome.
Comment from RodG
Your poem, Poet, reminds me of when I taught and asked my students to write an impromptu in-class poem. Sometimes I was pleasantly surprised; too often I received blank pages. I like how your poem is written from the student's POV. Great ending! Rod
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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Your poem, Poet, reminds me of when I taught and asked my students to write an impromptu in-class poem. Sometimes I was pleasantly surprised; too often I received blank pages. I like how your poem is written from the student's POV. Great ending! Rod
Comment Written 29-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Rod.
Comment from Amelie Johns
This is a great off-and-on rhyme contest entry. Not an easy one to do! You did a great job. I particularly love the ending! Cleverly done. Thank you for sharing.
Amelie
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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This is a great off-and-on rhyme contest entry. Not an easy one to do! You did a great job. I particularly love the ending! Cleverly done. Thank you for sharing.
Amelie
Comment Written 29-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Amelie.
