Comment from BermyBye50

Excellent

Bill,

Welcome to Fanstory. Congrats on winning the 5-7-5 Poem Contest. Your sense of humor is well presented in this poem comparing a joke with sex.

All the best,

Eugene

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024

Hello Eugene,

Thank you for your excellent review and your "Welcome to Fanstory," I appreciate that very much. However, I have been a member of Fanstory for 15 years now.

I hope and pray that Hurricane Helene did not cause you or any of your family any damage.

Have a great weekend...Bill

reply by BermyBye50 on 03-Oct-2024

Thank you Bill for your concern. I am thankful that Charlotte was minimally impacted by Helene as it passed west of the city.

Eugene

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

LOL -- what a thoughtbig ! Certainly brings a smile to the adult face... :-) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck to you in the competition! :-)

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024

Thank you very much for your great review, I really appreciate it. And, I am so glad it made you smile and thank you for your best of luck wish. It did win the contest.

Have a great week, my friend...Bill

Comment from Sally Law

Exceptional

A six for making me scream with laughter. I have a fractured foot and this just made my day. Congratulations on winning the contest, Bill. So well-deserved.
Sending along my very best.
Sal :))

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024

Hello Sal: Thanks so much for your great review and rating, I really appreciate it. It felt so good winning another contest, especially, since I haven't written anything in a long time. I joined Fanstory 15 years ago, just for the contests.

I hope and pray that this reply finds your fractured foot healing fast and that you and your family are safe and happy.
Your old friend...Bill

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Great joke and great accompanying notes. I couldn't exist this one. Your joke fits neatly into your 5-7-5 format and the image says it all. Well done! Debbie

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024

Thank you Debbie for your excellent review, I appreciate it. Even though there wasn't many entries in this contest, it was fun. I appreciate all the voters for their winning votes.

Have a great week, my friend,,,Bill

reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024

Thank you Debbie for your excellent review, I appreciate it. Even though there wasn't many entries in this contest, it was fun. I appreciate all the voters for their winning votes.

Have a great week, my friend,,,Bill

reply by Debbie D'Arcy on 30-Sep-2024

Sorry Cedar, I should have said I couldn't resist this one!

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is very well written and it is a good entry for the contest. I wish you a very good day and wonderful weekend and may God bless you with all of your writing. Patricia.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024

Thank you Patricia for your great review and rating, I do appreciate it very much. Have a wonderful weekend and may God bless you and your family...

reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024

Thank you Patricia for your great review and rating, I do appreciate it very much. Have a wonderful weekend and may God bless you and your family...

Comment from Katiemae1977

Exceptional

Goodbye mystery poet.
You've really used the 5-7-5 format well and I think.this will do very well in the contest. You've made me smile with this one.
Luv&stuff
Katiemaedead

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024

Thank you very much Katiemae for your wonderful review and rating, I appreciate it very much. Have a great weekend...