Truckin
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Comment from jim vecchio
A very good continuation. Wish I had more stars. Your writing is realistic and draws us into the story and gives us an eye-witness feeling of the action. I will be there waiting to see what happens to Clyde next.
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A very good continuation. Wish I had more stars. Your writing is realistic and draws us into the story and gives us an eye-witness feeling of the action. I will be there waiting to see what happens to Clyde next.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This chapter is gripping! I was pulled in by Clyde's growing paranoia. I love the "Billy the Kid" approach! I like the little touches like his interaction with his daughter. That really makes him feel real. And exciting chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next!
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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This chapter is gripping! I was pulled in by Clyde's growing paranoia. I love the "Billy the Kid" approach! I like the little touches like his interaction with his daughter. That really makes him feel real. And exciting chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next!
Comment Written 24-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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Thank you very, very much! I was a bit concerned that this segment lacked enough excitement.