The Great Supermarket Showdown
a battleground of opposing shopping philosophies5 total reviews
Comment from Aiona
What a cute story! Ugh! Sounds all too familiar. I hope Jake learns to curb himself though. He sounds like an addictive personality. Difficult to deal with in old age. Impulsive decisions..... I didn't see any typos! It was an easy read.
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What a cute story! Ugh! Sounds all too familiar. I hope Jake learns to curb himself though. He sounds like an addictive personality. Difficult to deal with in old age. Impulsive decisions..... I didn't see any typos! It was an easy read.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2024
Comment from Esther Brown
Very well done. Unfortunately many couples are not compatible grocery shopping. You chose a fun subject everyone can identify with I am sure. Now there is money, trust, religion, sex, politics...Good luck.
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Very well done. Unfortunately many couples are not compatible grocery shopping. You chose a fun subject everyone can identify with I am sure. Now there is money, trust, religion, sex, politics...Good luck.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2024
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written story about opposites attract. You used great descriptive words and very good imagery from your words and the artwork you chose. Best wishes in the contest! Teri
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
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This is a very well written story about opposites attract. You used great descriptive words and very good imagery from your words and the artwork you chose. Best wishes in the contest! Teri
Comment Written 25-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
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Teri,
Thank you for your review. Eight years ago I began this journey as a novice poet and writer and have over the years learned from many of the best and most talented writers and poets who have all been inspired and encouraged me to become a better writer. I'm overwhelmed and surprised by the 10 wins I've received in the past two months.
You have been a wonderful reviewer of my poems and writings and I appreciate your help and encouragement in helping me to achieve success.
All the best,
Eugene
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You are so welcome Eugene. I am thankful for friends like you on here! May God bless you on your journey with your writing and whatever you plan to do! Blessings, Teri
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Eugene, I love your light take on a shopping trip with two opposing forces. Nice compromise at the end.
Compromised worked for this newly wed couple!
Great story, Eugene.
Best wishes,
Cindy
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Eugene, I love your light take on a shopping trip with two opposing forces. Nice compromise at the end.
Compromised worked for this newly wed couple!
Great story, Eugene.
Best wishes,
Cindy
Comment Written 24-Sep-2024
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Opposites Attract writing prompt. This was a cute story and pretty accurate as someone who struggles to keep to a list herself. Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
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An excellent entry for the Opposites Attract writing prompt. This was a cute story and pretty accurate as someone who struggles to keep to a list herself. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 24-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
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Marilyn,
Thank you for your review. Eight years ago I began this journey as a novice poet and writer and have over the years learned from many of the best and most talented writers and poets who have all been inspired and encouraged me to become a better writer. I'm overwhelmed and surprised by the 10 wins I've received in the past two months.
You have been a wonderful reviewer of my poems and writings and I appreciate your help and encouragement in helping me to achieve success.
All the best,
Eugene
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You're doing awesome. Ten wins in two months is not an easy task. Keep up the good work!