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Seasonal Perspectives

From a hemispherical standpoint

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Comment from Wendy G
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Well, here am I on the southward side, enjoying a beautiful spring in Australia. We get used to the US assuming everyone is having Fall, so it's nice that you recognised our opposite-ness! Lol. A beautiful poem! Very well done, and best wishes for the contest.
Wendy

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
    Thank you so much for your review, Wendy -- glad I could make you smile! Enjoy your Spring!
Comment from jessizero
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I like that you wrote about the seasons in different hemispheres. Spring is grand, but it's fall where I live. LOL. I liked your rhymes, as well. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
    Thank you so much for your review, Jessi -- glad I could make you smile! Enjoy the Fall 'up here'!
Comment from papa55mike
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After a long winter, spring is the rebirth of all things, including our restless spirit. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
    Thank you so much for your review, Papa -- much appreciated!
Comment from Rachelle Allen
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Haha. Regarding your Author's Notes, I know what you're saying. That was one of my most interesting learning curves on here, too: WHAAAAT? Everyone's season isn't the same as MINE?!

I liked your balancing act between north and south observances of thecseasons.

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
    Thank you so much for your review -- glad I could make you smile! Enjoy your Fall 'up here'!
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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An excellent entry for the Spring writing prompt. This was such a cool poem and very creative. We often forget that our winter is someone else's summer. The picture is perfect.

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
    Thank you so much for your review -- have a great week!
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
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Your descriptive language describes the inevitable changes come springtime. I like finding a key line or phrase in poetry and I found one in yours. "Springtime heralds Earth's revival..."

zim

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
    Thank you so much for your review -- have a great week!
reply by Robert Zimmerman on 24-Sep-2024
    You're welcome!