Comment from Cindy Decker 3

Excellent

Gypsy,
I love the gentle passion in your lovely free-verse poem. You tell of a love, using nature's wonders to make such a passionate work.
Excellent free-verse, Gypsy.
Best wishes,
Cindy

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024

Thank you very much, Cindy

Gypsy 😊

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This free verse, Honey Morning Sky, finds an invested admirer who sees only the best at any moment of the day from early morning to the final ray of light.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024

Thank you very much, Bill

Gypsy 😊

Comment from Jacob1395

Excellent

The way how you describe autumn in this piece is so unique and original. particularly loved honey morning sky at the beginning, which really drew me in. Another brilliant piece, I really enjoyed it.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024

Thank you very much, Jacob

Gypsy 😊

Comment from LateBloomer

Excellent

Hi Gypsy, what a beautiful way to start the day. Well done. I love the colors and the sensory appeal. Beautiful presentation. Keep the blue waters flowing. Xo. M

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024

Thank you very much, M.

Gypsy 😊

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Exceptional

This contest entry is pure romance. I loved the way, she loved him morning, noon, afternoon, and night. Perfect. I don't think it can get any better than this. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024

Thank you very much, Barbara. I appreciate your exceptional six stars review.

Gypsy 😊

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

love the changing refrain throughout the day
may i ask why you didn't do another quatrain for the last stanza like the first two? just curious - probably just me lol!

great imagery for morning's painted skies, afternoon breezes, and night's river lullabies...

thank you for sharing!
shelley :)

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024

Free verse has no rules, other than not rhyming. I usually use symmetry of tercets, quatrains, etc... but it's not required. I made each line in a natural group of lines.

Thank you very much,
Shelley

Gypsy 😊
Gypsy 😊

reply by shelley kaye on 25-Sep-2024

yea, i know... probably just me and some ocd tendencies LOL!!

Comment from Rachelle Allen

Excellent

Oh, wow!! This is absolutely glorious! So positive and artistically drawn with words! So uplifting and lilting and energizing. I always love your work, Gypsy, but this one I find especially fabulous. xoxo

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024

Thank you very much, Rachelle

Gypsy 😊

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

A charming entry for the contest. Beautifully presented and expressed and my apologies for not having more to give here (I'm still regretting not being able to award a 6* for that wonderful Poe verse). The "honey" skilfully sets the tone of the verse and the warmth of that sun. Some excellent 'b' alliteration too. Good luck Gypsy! Debbie

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024

Thank you very much,
Debbie.

Gypsy 😊

Comment from RJ Heritage

Excellent

Beautiful Free verse poem, it flows nicely with an unforced rhythm. I like this kind of writing as it often gives freedom to express beyond meter and restricted form.
Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem. Good luck in the contest.
RJ

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024

Thank you very much, RJ

Gypsy 😊

reply by RJ Heritage on 25-Sep-2024

My pleasure
RJ

Comment from Katiemae1977

Excellent

This is an excellent free verse Gypsy. I like how you progressed with the I fell in love with you morning, noon and night.

The poem flows well and is very inventive.
Best wishes
Luv&stuff
Katiemae1977

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024

Thank you very much, Katiemae.

Gypsy 😊