Spring-a-ding-ding!
a poem2 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi
This is a cute uplifting poem about Spring. It is a freeing season. It gives us warmth and beauty after such a monochrome Winter. I like the repetition and the mono-rhyme other than the fourth lines of each stanza.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great day and week.
Joan
P S I have just published a book called The Interloper (and other stories in prose and poetry0" by Joan Pechter. It is available on Amazon.com.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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Hi
This is a cute uplifting poem about Spring. It is a freeing season. It gives us warmth and beauty after such a monochrome Winter. I like the repetition and the mono-rhyme other than the fourth lines of each stanza.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great day and week.
Joan
P S I have just published a book called The Interloper (and other stories in prose and poetry0" by Joan Pechter. It is available on Amazon.com.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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Thanks, Joan
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No problem.
Joan
Comment from Maria Millsaps
Spring-a ding ding. This interesting poem details the ding and dings of nature as Springs unfolds into a Spring a ding-ding. Thank you for sharing, and good luck.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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Spring-a ding ding. This interesting poem details the ding and dings of nature as Springs unfolds into a Spring a ding-ding. Thank you for sharing, and good luck.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Maria
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Have a a happy day.
