When Spring Comes
Goodbye, Winter!8 total reviews
Comment from Esther Brown
Well written Jim. Looks like you are climbing up the poet ranks one by one. One spring I was in AZ after an unusually wet year. The dry rivers ran and cactus bloomed. I have never seen anything more profound than all those colors in the desert. Sounds like you are in a wintry place. Esther
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Well written Jim. Looks like you are climbing up the poet ranks one by one. One spring I was in AZ after an unusually wet year. The dry rivers ran and cactus bloomed. I have never seen anything more profound than all those colors in the desert. Sounds like you are in a wintry place. Esther
Comment Written 25-Sep-2024
Comment from Ric Myworld
Brother Jim, wake up, you must be dreaming. For winter hasn't even set in yet, and just last week half the country was still in the 90s. But don't worry, you won't be wrong long, cold and blowing snow will be here soon. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
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Brother Jim, wake up, you must be dreaming. For winter hasn't even set in yet, and just last week half the country was still in the 90s. But don't worry, you won't be wrong long, cold and blowing snow will be here soon. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2024
Comment from Sanku
This is a very good entry for the contest .you have clearly explained how spring affects you and why .After the dreariness of winter spring lightens every ones heart .Hope you will win .all the best
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This is a very good entry for the contest .you have clearly explained how spring affects you and why .After the dreariness of winter spring lightens every ones heart .Hope you will win .all the best
Comment Written 24-Sep-2024
Comment from shelley kaye
i prefer winter.
when the temperature rises
my mood tends to lower...
but i can see how many others prefer the warmer months
this was a great spring poem with melting snow...
wait... how did i get this in the pms? it's a blind contest... WEIRD! fanstory gremlins are running amok again lol!
anyway, thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!
shelley :)
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i prefer winter.
when the temperature rises
my mood tends to lower...
but i can see how many others prefer the warmer months
this was a great spring poem with melting snow...
wait... how did i get this in the pms? it's a blind contest... WEIRD! fanstory gremlins are running amok again lol!
anyway, thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!
shelley :)
Comment Written 23-Sep-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I much prefer the spring and summer to the autumn winter seasons as I love the warmth and seeing things grow, your poem is uplifting and magical Jim, love Dolly x x x
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I much prefer the spring and summer to the autumn winter seasons as I love the warmth and seeing things grow, your poem is uplifting and magical Jim, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 23-Sep-2024
Comment from Karen Cherry
You look like you are having fun. I am still behind in reviewing. I owe you five more. I hope your health is doing okay. I have been watching "Brokenwood" on Acorn tv. Mysteries with humor. My favorite kind. Nice writing. Karen
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You look like you are having fun. I am still behind in reviewing. I owe you five more. I hope your health is doing okay. I have been watching "Brokenwood" on Acorn tv. Mysteries with humor. My favorite kind. Nice writing. Karen
Comment Written 23-Sep-2024
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very nicely, written poem expressing the joys of spring arrival after a cold winter. I enjoyed it very much and it is very well done. Patricia.
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This is a very nicely, written poem expressing the joys of spring arrival after a cold winter. I enjoyed it very much and it is very well done. Patricia.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2024
Comment from barbara.wilkey
You used strong descriptive words in this beautiful poem. I see you're ready for spring and we just began with autumn. LOL I enjoyed reading and thank you for sharing.
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You used strong descriptive words in this beautiful poem. I see you're ready for spring and we just began with autumn. LOL I enjoyed reading and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2024
