Frog's Wild Journey Home
poem for children contest5 total reviews
Comment from June Sargent
As I was reading this poem, I could imagine the lovely illustrations that would accompany the words. The rhyme and rhythm would entertain little ones as they looked at the artwork. This would make a great book! Well done.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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As I was reading this poem, I could imagine the lovely illustrations that would accompany the words. The rhyme and rhythm would entertain little ones as they looked at the artwork. This would make a great book! Well done.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Thank you
Comment from Begin Again
I can imagine all the vivid colors (like the one you used with the snail) attracting the children as each page of the story is revealed. Their imagination would explode. Well done!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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I can imagine all the vivid colors (like the one you used with the snail) attracting the children as each page of the story is revealed. Their imagination would explode. Well done!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Thank you
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Your animated story is sweet and endearing and I enjoyed this lighthearted tale. I wish you luck with the contest, writing poetry for children is not easy, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Your animated story is sweet and endearing and I enjoyed this lighthearted tale. I wish you luck with the contest, writing poetry for children is not easy, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Thank you
Comment from Amelie Johns
It sounds like this frog had quite a journey home. This poem tells a great story. It could be made into a book. I could imagine sitting down with my little ones and having great fun reading this with lots of animation. Thanks for sharing. Best of luck in the contest.
Amelie
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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It sounds like this frog had quite a journey home. This poem tells a great story. It could be made into a book. I could imagine sitting down with my little ones and having great fun reading this with lots of animation. Thanks for sharing. Best of luck in the contest.
Amelie
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Thank you
Comment from Sarah Probe S.
Amazing poem for a child, full of joy and cheerful verses, easy to insert in a song and to memorise by little children,
I also liked your artistic vision: the colourful pink words against the royal blue background and the multicoloured snail,
Well done:)
Sarah
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Amazing poem for a child, full of joy and cheerful verses, easy to insert in a song and to memorise by little children,
I also liked your artistic vision: the colourful pink words against the royal blue background and the multicoloured snail,
Well done:)
Sarah
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Thank you