Hannah's Happy Fall Day
Number three in the Hannah Rose Series6 total reviews
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Congratulations Boogie. I am pleased to see you are still writing. The poem expresses the fun that comes from little things in life. I hope to read more of your writing. You are the last person I communicated with before I left two years ago. Well Done.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
Congratulations Boogie. I am pleased to see you are still writing. The poem expresses the fun that comes from little things in life. I hope to read more of your writing. You are the last person I communicated with before I left two years ago. Well Done.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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I'm glad you're back. Thank you for this wonderful review. :)
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You are welcome! 🙂
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Hannah's Happy Fall Day, presented with six ABCB-rhymed quatrains, brings in all the best activities we associate with this special time of year. Nice.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
This poem, Hannah's Happy Fall Day, presented with six ABCB-rhymed quatrains, brings in all the best activities we associate with this special time of year. Nice.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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Thanks so much for this great review. :)
Comment from Lindsey Russell
This poem speaks of a wonderful, fun fall day. That makes it beautiful in my opinion. I really enjoyed reading it! Great work! Thanks for sharing and happy writing!
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
This poem speaks of a wonderful, fun fall day. That makes it beautiful in my opinion. I really enjoyed reading it! Great work! Thanks for sharing and happy writing!
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much for this nice review. :)
Comment from Begin Again
Hannah was going to be on a sugar rush...but she certainly was having fun. We picked the pumpkins yesterday but it was 90 degrees and didn't feel much like fall. Strange weather for late September. I want to see all the colorful leaves like Hannah!
smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
Hannah was going to be on a sugar rush...but she certainly was having fun. We picked the pumpkins yesterday but it was 90 degrees and didn't feel much like fall. Strange weather for late September. I want to see all the colorful leaves like Hannah!
smiles, Carol
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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Hahahaha! You are right about the sugar rush. Hannah is my granddaughter and l can attest to it. Thanks so much for reading my poem. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Children never doubt the seasons like we do as adults, they embrace changes and as we age we fight against change. I enjoyed your positive and uplifting post for the contest. Good rhymes with a fine flow, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
Children never doubt the seasons like we do as adults, they embrace changes and as we age we fight against change. I enjoyed your positive and uplifting post for the contest. Good rhymes with a fine flow, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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Thank you, lbreally appreciate your opinion. :)
Comment from Sarah Probe S.
many thanks for a cheerful rhyming poem that could be used for a nursery rhyme song, evoking childhood memories and the autumn festive season,
well done ;)
Warm regards,
Sarah
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
many thanks for a cheerful rhyming poem that could be used for a nursery rhyme song, evoking childhood memories and the autumn festive season,
well done ;)
Warm regards,
Sarah
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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Thank you, it's very appreciated. :)