2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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8 total reviews
Comment from Mark D. R.
Gypsy,
A very nice presentation for this post.
Artwork and coloring scheme work hand in hand with your verse.
Mark
P.S. Not quite sure if the plant should be pluralized or not for your poem: forget me notS (sic).It may have a double meaning for you.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
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Gypsy,
A very nice presentation for this post.
Artwork and coloring scheme work hand in hand with your verse.
Mark
P.S. Not quite sure if the plant should be pluralized or not for your poem: forget me notS (sic).It may have a double meaning for you.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Mark. I meant to use 'forget me not' because it's the flower but also means, 'don't forget me' is the satori
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
What a nice bouquet for the hermit who died living a lonely life. The Spanish moss decorates his tombstone and the "forget-me-nots" show that he's not forgotten.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
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What a nice bouquet for the hermit who died living a lonely life. The Spanish moss decorates his tombstone and the "forget-me-nots" show that he's not forgotten.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister.
Marival 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
Interestingly his grave is covered with forget me not, which perhaps speaks to his desire never to have been forgotten. However, the moss might suggest otherwise.
Nicely done
RJ
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
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Interestingly his grave is covered with forget me not, which perhaps speaks to his desire never to have been forgotten. However, the moss might suggest otherwise.
Nicely done
RJ
Comment Written 17-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ
Gypsy 😊
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You're welcome
RJ
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You're welcome RJ
Comment from kahpot
Excellent, at least someone new or cared for this hermit, or maybe the right flowers just grew there for them, as always very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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Excellent, at least someone new or cared for this hermit, or maybe the right flowers just grew there for them, as always very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 17-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from shelley kaye
i think forget-me-not is hyphenated...
also, i don't think you need the "and"
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excellent imagistic haiku with deep emotions swelling between the lines
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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i think forget-me-not is hyphenated...
also, i don't think you need the "and"
- or maybe that's just me lol -
excellent imagistic haiku with deep emotions swelling between the lines
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 17-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Bill Schott
This haiku, Hermit's Grave, has the proper formatting and brings the readers to this lonely spot where someone was interred by those around then to give this one good turn.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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This haiku, Hermit's Grave, has the proper formatting and brings the readers to this lonely spot where someone was interred by those around then to give this one good turn.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from royowen
We haven't seen the muppets in such a long time, instead of in kid's program, but I loved them when it was adult entertainment, but it does seem like the death of Kermit, beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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We haven't seen the muppets in such a long time, instead of in kid's program, but I loved them when it was adult entertainment, but it does seem like the death of Kermit, beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 17-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
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Most welcome
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Most welcome Gypsy
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Gypsy,
Your elegant poem is both beautiful and ironic. A hermit who may have had few friends in life, and forget me nots on his grave.
Very nice haiku, Gypsy!
Best wishes,
Cindy
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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Gypsy,
Your elegant poem is both beautiful and ironic. A hermit who may have had few friends in life, and forget me nots on his grave.
Very nice haiku, Gypsy!
Best wishes,
Cindy
Comment Written 17-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊