Sea Monsters
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I wonder why mermaids are mad with the moon? Is it because they do not want to be seen? An ambient and picturesque Haiku for the contest, much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x
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I wonder why mermaids are mad with the moon? Is it because they do not want to be seen? An ambient and picturesque Haiku for the contest, much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 17-Sep-2024
Comment from jessizero
The formatting helped bring this poem to life, but it was a great poem on its own. You also got the syllable counts right. I liked your use of the word "alight" because people don't hear it enough. :) Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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The formatting helped bring this poem to life, but it was a great poem on its own. You also got the syllable counts right. I liked your use of the word "alight" because people don't hear it enough. :) Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2024