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Gary wins at PacMan3 total reviews
Comment from jim vecchio
Another positive tale, but you misspelled the game. it's PacMan. Don't ask me why, I never was into it. would like to see you lengthen these tales, adding more detail.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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Another positive tale, but you misspelled the game. it's PacMan. Don't ask me why, I never was into it. would like to see you lengthen these tales, adding more detail.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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It's fixed. Thank you for your help and review!
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Keep on writing!
Comment from nomi338
Good for Gary. I myself, am not very good at video games. I prefer word games and things like solitaire, Jigsaw puzzles, Bingo, Candy crush, and games like that, oh and Bejeweled, I really like that game.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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Good for Gary. I myself, am not very good at video games. I prefer word games and things like solitaire, Jigsaw puzzles, Bingo, Candy crush, and games like that, oh and Bejeweled, I really like that game.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Well, I can't fault any of this in terms of content. You've definitely proof-read. But I think you could do with writing longer pieces with more of a story-line so that the reader feels more invested emotionally. Your next step to becoming a good writer? Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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Well, I can't fault any of this in terms of content. You've definitely proof-read. But I think you could do with writing longer pieces with more of a story-line so that the reader feels more invested emotionally. Your next step to becoming a good writer? Take care Debbie
Comment Written 17-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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Thank you, I will!
