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I will write more stories.5 total reviews
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine post, Raul......and belief in yourself is crucial in your quest to improve, something that's a never ending struggle with me. It took me years to get there, with still miles to go
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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Another fine post, Raul......and belief in yourself is crucial in your quest to improve, something that's a never ending struggle with me. It took me years to get there, with still miles to go
Comment Written 17-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from jim vecchio
As always, you are heading in the right direction. You didn't misspell anything, including 'misspell' which can be difficult at times. Keep up the good work!
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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As always, you are heading in the right direction. You didn't misspell anything, including 'misspell' which can be difficult at times. Keep up the good work!
Comment Written 17-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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Thank you!
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You're welcome.
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Raul,
These mottos, goals, and affirmations show positive thinking and progress-oriented work. It's well-written.
Another reviewer also pointed out the second sentence should say "I am able to write stories."
Paragraphs and page-long compositions are good goals. I have yet to write an entire novel myself. I keep putting the three chapters I have aside to work on other things, ha ha.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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Raul,
These mottos, goals, and affirmations show positive thinking and progress-oriented work. It's well-written.
Another reviewer also pointed out the second sentence should say "I am able to write stories."
Paragraphs and page-long compositions are good goals. I have yet to write an entire novel myself. I keep putting the three chapters I have aside to work on other things, ha ha.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from royowen
It's probably best if we leave the judgement to other writers as to our improvement, it has more bang that way. Your spelling is good, some of your idioms and syntax aren't quite right yet, but you are definitely improving Raul, well done, blessings Roy
Typo : Posting mor(e) posts,
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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It's probably best if we leave the judgement to other writers as to our improvement, it has more bang that way. Your spelling is good, some of your idioms and syntax aren't quite right yet, but you are definitely improving Raul, well done, blessings Roy
Typo : Posting mor(e) posts,
Comment Written 16-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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It's fixed. Thank you!
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Well done
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Raul,
Your story is so positive. It's an excellent piece of prose.
Note: your second sentence should read "I am able."
Otherwise, you've written a grammatically correct story. (Including punctuation).
Best wishes, Raul.
Keep writing,
Cindy
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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Raul,
Your story is so positive. It's an excellent piece of prose.
Note: your second sentence should read "I am able."
Otherwise, you've written a grammatically correct story. (Including punctuation).
Best wishes, Raul.
Keep writing,
Cindy
Comment Written 16-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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Thank you!
