Comment from
RodG
I like your analogy of scattered leaves on the ground being like a mosaic put together by a talented artist. Your poem flows smoothly from one line to the next. Good luck in the contest. Rod
Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2024
Thank you very much Rod for your review and good luck wishes.
Glad you liked the mosaic analogy.
Comment from
Begin Again
What a beautiful description and yes the colored leaves do look like a mosiac pattern on the ground. WEll done. And a pleasure to read. Good luck in the contest.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
Thank you Carol for your review and good luck wishes!
Take care.