2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from kahpot
hope you have some slippers, I think we can/will all relate to these words, especially those with an outhouse as the cold approaches, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2024
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hope you have some slippers, I think we can/will all relate to these words, especially those with an outhouse as the cold approaches, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2024
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LoL
Thank you very much, kym.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Teri7
This is a very lovely haiku you have penned. I love the imagery you have used to go with your great words. I hope one day I can figure all the ways to make my work look good too! Thank you for sharing always. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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This is a very lovely haiku you have penned. I love the imagery you have used to go with your great words. I hope one day I can figure all the ways to make my work look good too! Thank you for sharing always. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 14-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Teri
Gypsy 😊
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You are so welcome my friend! love and blessings, Teri
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You are so welcome sweet friend! love and blessings, Teri
Comment from lyenochka
Lol. Well, when "nature calls" you have to rush, especially if it's an urgent call. I like how you start out with a feeling of being out camping in the cold winter outside and surprise us with the tile floor!
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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Lol. Well, when "nature calls" you have to rush, especially if it's an urgent call. I like how you start out with a feeling of being out camping in the cold winter outside and surprise us with the tile floor!
Comment Written 14-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Big Sister
MariVal 😘 😊
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
You're definitely on a roll, Gypsy, and here's another one that made me chuckle! Love the way the middle line connects with the first and third and you manage to send that chill right through me. Well done! Debbie
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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You're definitely on a roll, Gypsy, and here's another one that made me chuckle! Love the way the middle line connects with the first and third and you manage to send that chill right through me. Well done! Debbie
Comment Written 14-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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Thank you very, Debbie
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from Neonewman
Gypsy, this was a fun little piece that had me laughing out loud, at work no less. When nature calls.Great job, beautiful artwork, my friend.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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Gypsy, this was a fun little piece that had me laughing out loud, at work no less. When nature calls.Great job, beautiful artwork, my friend.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 14-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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Thank you very, Steve
Gypsy hugs 😊
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My pleasure, Gypsy.
Comment from shelley kaye
lol! totally cool haiku about waking in the middle of the night with nature calling!
love the satori!!
great imagery and smooth flow rushing through
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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lol! totally cool haiku about waking in the middle of the night with nature calling!
love the satori!!
great imagery and smooth flow rushing through
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 14-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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Thank you very, Shelley
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I understand what you meant by nature calling, but it reminded me of a story. My second baby was an infant, and I was up walking the floor with him in the middle of the night. A blanket of snow covered the ground, and it was cold. The moon was full or at least close to full. I heard a horrible howl out the window. We lived on a farm out in the middle of nowhere in Missouri. Walking down the middle of the snow-covered road was a pack of maybe 7 or 8 wolves. It was scary even though I was inside.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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I understand what you meant by nature calling, but it reminded me of a story. My second baby was an infant, and I was up walking the floor with him in the middle of the night. A blanket of snow covered the ground, and it was cold. The moon was full or at least close to full. I heard a horrible howl out the window. We lived on a farm out in the middle of nowhere in Missouri. Walking down the middle of the snow-covered road was a pack of maybe 7 or 8 wolves. It was scary even though I was inside.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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Wow, that sounds like a Halloween flash nonfiction story.
Thank you very, Barbara l
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
So many of us, if not all, have experienced this as nature calls. When nights are chilly, it sometimes fell unfair to respond to its call. But what is the alternative? When certain things in life call, we must respond. Beautifully written.
RJ
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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So many of us, if not all, have experienced this as nature calls. When nights are chilly, it sometimes fell unfair to respond to its call. But what is the alternative? When certain things in life call, we must respond. Beautifully written.
RJ
Comment Written 14-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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Thank you very, RJ
Gypsy hugs 😊
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You're welcome
RJ
Comment from royowen
Sometimes I have to rise for a nature call, and being as warm as toast in bed, I remove my socks and warm feet on cold floors isn't the best thing to experience, well done. Gypsy, great write, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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Sometimes I have to rise for a nature call, and being as warm as toast in bed, I remove my socks and warm feet on cold floors isn't the best thing to experience, well done. Gypsy, great write, blessings Roy
Comment Written 14-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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In California we have cold Winters and the tile floors get very cold. I think it's the opposite in Australia. 😊
Thank you very much Roy
Gypsy hugs 😊
Thank you very, Roy.
Gypsy hugs 😊
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No, exactly the same, ours is Mediteranean as is yours, up north is tropical in Australia, gum trees are Aussie natives, you grow them there
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Oh, thanks, good to know. I grow up in Spain which is next to the Mediterranean.... I love that sea. I live in California, USA, now and our sea is the pacific. 😊
Comment from patcelaw
This is very well written and very deeply presented and I enjoy very much listening to it. I wish you the very best for the weekend and may God bless you and keep you safe. Patricia.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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This is very well written and very deeply presented and I enjoy very much listening to it. I wish you the very best for the weekend and may God bless you and keep you safe. Patricia.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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Thank you very, Patricia
Gypsy hugs 😊