Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

Wow, what a thrilling ride! Your story is packed with energy and twists. I was on the edge of my seat with the snowmobile leap. Your detailed descriptions really pulled me in. I especially enjoyed the humor. The cliffhanger ending leaves me eager to know what happens next! Excellent job capturing all the excitement and drama.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024

Thank you for the excellent review, Michael. Yeah, not many folks on here like action packed but I always love writing it. Lol. Plus I always like to throw some humor in my ridiculous stuff. I really appreciate the stars and stop in, friend. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have yourself a great day.

Ron

Comment from lancellot

Exceptional

Well, you've got the way over the top Bond action going, and the inhuman stunts with perfect timing, luck and a vast amount of suspension of disbelief. Good ending, bringing the FanStory community into the story. Great idea that may bring this story victory.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024

Thank you for the great review and big sixer, Lance. Yeah, all action has to be over the top. Lol. I really appreciate the stop in and generous rating, friend. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a great rest of your weekend and thanks again.