Wonder
A very long sentence.11 total reviews
Comment from jake cosmos aller
I liked this prose poem about seeing the wonders of the world through the eyes of a child. this would make a wonderful Haibun all you need to do is to add a haiku at the end to sum up the message of the proise poem
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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I liked this prose poem about seeing the wonders of the world through the eyes of a child. this would make a wonderful Haibun all you need to do is to add a haiku at the end to sum up the message of the proise poem
Comment Written 20-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Hi, Jake. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from estory
Interesting prose poetry, what I like about it is that it spans a broad range of experiences, the kalaidascope of experiences that we have in life, from the joys of little children just exploring the world, to marriage, to the mystery of the night sky and the sunsets and the changing seasons. A colorful sentence indeed. estory
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Interesting prose poetry, what I like about it is that it spans a broad range of experiences, the kalaidascope of experiences that we have in life, from the joys of little children just exploring the world, to marriage, to the mystery of the night sky and the sunsets and the changing seasons. A colorful sentence indeed. estory
Comment Written 19-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Thanks again!
Comment from June Sargent
It is indeed all of the above that fill our eyes with childlike wonder and our hearts with love and gratitude. Being open to such wondrous beauty is the secret to staying young at heart. Grandchildren are a special delight.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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It is indeed all of the above that fill our eyes with childlike wonder and our hearts with love and gratitude. Being open to such wondrous beauty is the secret to staying young at heart. Grandchildren are a special delight.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Thanks again!
Comment from Begin Again
Your sweet great granddaughter, Aliana, blesses you, but then I believe you know that. As your poem says, the simple things leave us with lasting memories and make a significant impression on our lives. Have a great day!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Your sweet great granddaughter, Aliana, blesses you, but then I believe you know that. As your poem says, the simple things leave us with lasting memories and make a significant impression on our lives. Have a great day!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 19-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Hi, Carol. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from GWHARGIS
I think all of those things you mentioned above are awe inspiring and fill you with wonder. But in addition we all have our own lists. Walking through the forest is one thing I love. Each tree so individual and different, yet in mass they all look the same. Great poem that was quite thought provoking. Gretchen
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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I think all of those things you mentioned above are awe inspiring and fill you with wonder. But in addition we all have our own lists. Walking through the forest is one thing I love. Each tree so individual and different, yet in mass they all look the same. Great poem that was quite thought provoking. Gretchen
Comment Written 18-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Hi, Gretchen. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Mike,
Very sweet photo! Your great-granddaughter is so cute!
Your one sentence poem is full of beautiful images : a hummingbird in flight, a grandchild's beautiful eyes, the Milky Way.
A very lovely poem, Mike!
Best wishes,
Cindy
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Mike,
Very sweet photo! Your great-granddaughter is so cute!
Your one sentence poem is full of beautiful images : a hummingbird in flight, a grandchild's beautiful eyes, the Milky Way.
A very lovely poem, Mike!
Best wishes,
Cindy
Comment Written 18-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Thanks again!
Comment from Maria Millsaps
This was an endearing poem about things that give us joy and bring us wealth that cannot be obtained with money. I like the simple language that conveys a significant message. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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This was an endearing poem about things that give us joy and bring us wealth that cannot be obtained with money. I like the simple language that conveys a significant message. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Hi, Maria. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Amelie Johns
This certainly is a very long sentence and I enjoyed reading every word. A lovely poem. What a beautiful great grandchild you have. Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed reading this piece.
Best wishes,
Amelie
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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This certainly is a very long sentence and I enjoyed reading every word. A lovely poem. What a beautiful great grandchild you have. Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed reading this piece.
Best wishes,
Amelie
Comment Written 18-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Hi, Amelie. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from royowen
Yes, she looks like my elder child at the same age, she has the fine hair and blue eyes, my daughter has grown up to be a beautiful person, inside and out, like I'm sure your great granddaughter will, well done, Mike, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Yes, she looks like my elder child at the same age, she has the fine hair and blue eyes, my daughter has grown up to be a beautiful person, inside and out, like I'm sure your great granddaughter will, well done, Mike, blessings Roy
Comment Written 18-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Hi, Roy. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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Most welcome
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Most welcome
Comment from Lindsey Russell
I love this. I think it's neat that it's a very long sentence. The picture of your granddaughter is so cute and sweet. Thank you for sharing and happy writing!
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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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I love this. I think it's neat that it's a very long sentence. The picture of your granddaughter is so cute and sweet. Thank you for sharing and happy writing!
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Comment Written 18-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Hi, Lindsey. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
