Reflections
Twisted Loop8 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
Ciao poet you now have now 9 votes.
When I take a walk in my pine forest I often ponder on the things that happened lately in my life.
Sometimes I even go further back in time and I think of my parents and the short time we had together.
And that's when I have many regrets.
If only we could live our lives a second time ..
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2024
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Ciao poet you now have now 9 votes.
When I take a walk in my pine forest I often ponder on the things that happened lately in my life.
Sometimes I even go further back in time and I think of my parents and the short time we had together.
And that's when I have many regrets.
If only we could live our lives a second time ..
Comment Written 17-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2024
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Hello Franca. Thanks for the lovely review! so sorry for the late response. hugs, my friend. :). Thanks also for the vote!!
Melissa
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Ohhhh, you did SUCH a fantastic job with this new form that we invented!! I am totally impressed with your creation here and could not love it more! You embraced it and ACED it, in the way that is your calling card. REALLY nice work, Mystery Poet!! xoxox
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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Ohhhh, you did SUCH a fantastic job with this new form that we invented!! I am totally impressed with your creation here and could not love it more! You embraced it and ACED it, in the way that is your calling card. REALLY nice work, Mystery Poet!! xoxox
Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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Thank you dear Rachelle. This was very challenging and I wasn't sure I could do it. I really appreciate you including me in this prompt!! Hugs!
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Oh, you NAILED it!!! But then, I would expect no less from the likes of Talented You. xoxox
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Hugs! Crazy you!
Comment from Bill Schott
This twisted loop poem, Reflections, has the proper formatting and is presented with ease and correctness which makes the device invisible within the piece.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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This twisted loop poem, Reflections, has the proper formatting and is presented with ease and correctness which makes the device invisible within the piece.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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Oh, thank you Bill for these words. Loops are hard and to make them appear seamless is a gargantuan task. So appreciate your review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed your clever twisted loop as you choose words that sound the same but have very different meanings, a fine entry for the contest and these poems are quite hard to write, so well done, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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I enjoyed your clever twisted loop as you choose words that sound the same but have very different meanings, a fine entry for the contest and these poems are quite hard to write, so well done, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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Thanks so much Dolly!!
Comment from papa55mike
I've read many entries in this contest, and I like this one. That's an interesting form. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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I've read many entries in this contest, and I like this one. That's an interesting form. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much Mike!
Comment from Begin Again
Without the memories to console me and keep my mind from the darkness, my walk would be a desolate one. Your poem tells us to be positive and seize the joy where we can.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Without the memories to console me and keep my mind from the darkness, my walk would be a desolate one. Your poem tells us to be positive and seize the joy where we can.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Thank you Carol!
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi
This is an interesting twist on the loop poem. I must make it harder to write when you have to find homophones. It makes in more fun to read.
I like the idea of reflecting on life while taking a walk.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck in the contest.
Have a nice weekend.
Joan
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Hi
This is an interesting twist on the loop poem. I must make it harder to write when you have to find homophones. It makes in more fun to read.
I like the idea of reflecting on life while taking a walk.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck in the contest.
Have a nice weekend.
Joan
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Thanks so much Joan.
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Don't mention it.
Joan
P S I just published a book that is now available on Amazon, titled The Interloper (and other stories in prose and poetry) by Joan Pechter
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
For me this is about slowing down and taking in what you have experienced in life. I love that. You have a gentle tone which I really enjoyed. Beautifully written with excellent word choices. It's a hint that we should consider their own past. Truly lovely!
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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For me this is about slowing down and taking in what you have experienced in life. I love that. You have a gentle tone which I really enjoyed. Beautifully written with excellent word choices. It's a hint that we should consider their own past. Truly lovely!
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Thanks so much Michael.