Aiming to Be the Best for You
Avis and I continue to try...6 total reviews
Comment from Sanku
Clearly "He she remembers being twice as good"was second or third best in all other categories .And she is happy.
I think this should be in the romance category.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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Clearly "He she remembers being twice as good"was second or third best in all other categories .And she is happy.
I think this should be in the romance category.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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Thank you. It was a soap in the making, but Brook ended up with Ridge, at least for now.
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Aiming to be the Best for You, may be the revealing of a woman's plan to make Hertz the number one kisser in your kissing contest........
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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This poem, Aiming to be the Best for You, may be the revealing of a woman's plan to make Hertz the number one kisser in your kissing contest........
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Nah - forty years passed
She would have been gine
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I love how this poem blends humor with a serious message. The promise to strive for the title of "best kisser" says a lot. And the line "we will have to practice" is perfect. It's a sweet way of declaring love that made me smile. Great job.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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I love how this poem blends humor with a serious message. The promise to strive for the title of "best kisser" says a lot. And the line "we will have to practice" is perfect. It's a sweet way of declaring love that made me smile. Great job.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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It might even be funnier if the reviewers understood she really did rate someone better, and never told me who it was, but whatever, he obviously did not pursue her and I did. Thank you.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I adored the sentiments in this post Tom as you continue to perfect your kisses and the love for your wife is evident in every word here, a joy to read, far from being second best, you are the best, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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I adored the sentiments in this post Tom as you continue to perfect your kisses and the love for your wife is evident in every word here, a joy to read, far from being second best, you are the best, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Aah. Lucky for my wife, you and I, hadn't met or she might have to have searched on for something better to replace number one kisser.
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Ha ha ha x x. x
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Not funny but funny writing prompt. This sounds like a perfect relationship to me. I think you are on to something...she doesn't really think you are second best, she enjoys making you try harder to be better. Smart woman.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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An excellent entry for the Not funny but funny writing prompt. This sounds like a perfect relationship to me. I think you are on to something...she doesn't really think you are second best, she enjoys making you try harder to be better. Smart woman.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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And the light goes on! I think your observation is correct.
Comment from jake cosmos aller
a nice wry comment about marriage and a women settling for number two choice and making her husband feel that he has to continuously try to make up for his shortcomings.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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a nice wry comment about marriage and a women settling for number two choice and making her husband feel that he has to continuously try to make up for his shortcomings.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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... and yet after years, was it a ploy to have me try harder. She';; never tell. Thank you.
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... and yet after years, was it a ploy to have me try harder. She';; never tell. Thank you.
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... and yet after years, was it a ploy to have me try harder. She';; never tell. Thank you.
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... and yet after years, was it a ploy to have me try harder. She';; never tell. Thank you.
