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Twisted loop poem6 total reviews
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Hey, you did a GREAT job with this crazy form!!! I am so impressed with you!! I hope everyone else who reads it thinks it's equally outstanding and puts you into the winner's circle!! Thank you so much for participating in this contest!! xoxox
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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Hey, you did a GREAT job with this crazy form!!! I am so impressed with you!! I hope everyone else who reads it thinks it's equally outstanding and puts you into the winner's circle!! Thank you so much for participating in this contest!! xoxox
Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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Thank you
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My pleasure!!! xoxoxo
Comment from Sugarray77
Hi there and good afternoon. Your Twisted Loop entry was very well crafted. This is an extremely difficult poetic form, but your verse answered this prompt perfectly. I wish you good luck in the contest.
Melissa
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Hi there and good afternoon. Your Twisted Loop entry was very well crafted. This is an extremely difficult poetic form, but your verse answered this prompt perfectly. I wish you good luck in the contest.
Melissa
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Thank you
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a clever loop using words sounding the same but with very different meanings. I enjoyed the flow and rhymes and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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This is a clever loop using words sounding the same but with very different meanings. I enjoyed the flow and rhymes and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Thank you
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This piece has a playful rhythm that works so well especially giving how it was written. I love how you used the "same" word at the start of the next sentence. That is so unique and fun. I like how you smoothly transitioned between the different meanings of words. This is such a creative and fun poem. Nicely done!
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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This piece has a playful rhythm that works so well especially giving how it was written. I love how you used the "same" word at the start of the next sentence. That is so unique and fun. I like how you smoothly transitioned between the different meanings of words. This is such a creative and fun poem. Nicely done!
Comment Written 12-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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Thank you
Comment from Begin Again
I've been reading Loop Poems but this one was so different.... I admit a Poet I am not so it fascinates me to see what you ar able to do with your repeat of words...but different.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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I've been reading Loop Poems but this one was so different.... I admit a Poet I am not so it fascinates me to see what you ar able to do with your repeat of words...but different.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Thank you
Comment from Marion Issa
This poetry challenge was tricky , so I applaud your work! I really like the theme, just some of the sentences don't flow so easily, like the grammar is slightly off to accommodate for the homonyms, but I really like your creativity
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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This poetry challenge was tricky , so I applaud your work! I really like the theme, just some of the sentences don't flow so easily, like the grammar is slightly off to accommodate for the homonyms, but I really like your creativity
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Thank you