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Comment from Bill Schott
Somewhere along the way I see that the poisoning of rats has bagged the neighbor's dogs, the neighbor. and some guy named Walter. The trial will be very interesting.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Somewhere along the way I see that the poisoning of rats has bagged the neighbor's dogs, the neighbor. and some guy named Walter. The trial will be very interesting.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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No trial sweetie pie she has video tape of everything. She may be old like me, but like me, she is no slouch. Thanks for the read. Karen
Comment from Ric Myworld
Well, like I've said most of my life, "Whatever works." Sounds like a great way to get rid of the neighbor, his dogs, and the rats. And you'll want to keep that recipe. :-) Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Well, like I've said most of my life, "Whatever works." Sounds like a great way to get rid of the neighbor, his dogs, and the rats. And you'll want to keep that recipe. :-) Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Applejack pie. Without the additive is lovely. It is an apple pie with extra cinnamon and melted caramels, and a crunchy brown sugar lattice crunch. And he used his greasy fingers to eat that work of art. Death to the infidels! Still waiting on Tuckers first case. Tucker could never sit still long enough to find himself, but he could find people. He always could. Like when that Willy Ray went missing. He was only 16 at the time but he knew that boy would never voluntarily be too far from home. his mamma was the best baker in two counties and she baked cakes, pies and cookies all day long.
Willy was her taster. and he wouldn't give up that job for nuthin'. HINT :-)
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LOL
Comment from karenina
Congrats on your milestone #300! This IS funny! I have no sympathy for rats so I didn't feel a twinge of guilt about enjoying your murderous plans. A shame old Walter got into the pie...but then again? He is in one of your stories and that's hazardous to his health right there! One little typo:
"pulling upmy flowers"
This was a very "crisp" read and your turns of phrases almost sounded British they were so proper!
Keep us entertained!
Karenina
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Congrats on your milestone #300! This IS funny! I have no sympathy for rats so I didn't feel a twinge of guilt about enjoying your murderous plans. A shame old Walter got into the pie...but then again? He is in one of your stories and that's hazardous to his health right there! One little typo:
"pulling upmy flowers"
This was a very "crisp" read and your turns of phrases almost sounded British they were so proper!
Keep us entertained!
Karenina
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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I already edited that. Thanks for your good eye anyway. I read a lot of british mysteries and watch them too, I have had more that one person think I was a misplaced Englisj Lady! Haha Karen
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Shall I call you Dame Threadgill? It has a nice ring to it!
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I am taking back my maiden name Karen Lynn Cherry.
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Pretty! I think that's awesome!
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I never really cared for my middle name of Lynn. I only ever heard it in the angry three name call when I was in trouble. "Karen Lynn Cherry you get your little heinie in here this minute!" We all know what that means! So, maybe I'll just be Karen Cherry that rolls off the tongue doesn't it?
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Karen,
it looks like you got the king rat. What kind of buffoon eats anything from the top of a garbage can? He sounds like he had a little raven or crow in his bloodline. I've had neighbors, not quite that bad, but bad enough. Few things in life are more frustrating than lousy neighbors. At least this one won't be bothering you anymore. Well done gal.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Hello Karen,
it looks like you got the king rat. What kind of buffoon eats anything from the top of a garbage can? He sounds like he had a little raven or crow in his bloodline. I've had neighbors, not quite that bad, but bad enough. Few things in life are more frustrating than lousy neighbors. At least this one won't be bothering you anymore. Well done gal.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 12-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Marilyn said that I should make an a-z book about death. So that's what I am doing. If you can think of a better name let me know. Karen
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Clever story. Good work.
"...fat lot of good that does" - I love this phrase. I use it all the time in speech.
My friend, Jim offered to help, - (My friend, Jim, offered to help...)
He said he could pelt him with rocks or something, - A period would be better than a comma.
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Clever story. Good work.
"...fat lot of good that does" - I love this phrase. I use it all the time in speech.
My friend, Jim offered to help, - (My friend, Jim, offered to help...)
He said he could pelt him with rocks or something, - A period would be better than a comma.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Thank you for the read. I edited and found another one! I love this story. Karen
Comment from Jim Wile
Congratulations on your 300th posting, Karen. Quite an accomplishment! You've got another amusing story here of death to the deserved. Well, sort of deserved anyway. He should have had better control over his dogs. And what uncouth person just helps himself to a pie sitting out on top of a garbage can? Yeah, I'd say he deserves his fate. At least you had the foresight to tape what you were doing. Good thinking!
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Congratulations on your 300th posting, Karen. Quite an accomplishment! You've got another amusing story here of death to the deserved. Well, sort of deserved anyway. He should have had better control over his dogs. And what uncouth person just helps himself to a pie sitting out on top of a garbage can? Yeah, I'd say he deserves his fate. At least you had the foresight to tape what you were doing. Good thinking!
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Well, the story started out to be a very well thought out straight and darkly clever plot. However, somehow it turned out to be Jerry Lewis. Who's in charge here anyway? Thanks for the read friend. Love to you and yours. Karen
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Congratulations on your 300-milestone post. I enjoyed reading. I was wondering if after giving all those warning, if it's still against the law??? HMM interesting question. LOL
My friend Jim offered to help, but he's in a (friend,)
They spend a lot of time pulling up ,my flowers and vegetables knocking my trash over, (TRY - They spend a lot of time pulling up my flowers and vegetables, knocking my trash over, )
"Let's knock down the old lady". (lady.")
Actually, I don't know their names, So I gave them ones. (so)
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Congratulations on your 300-milestone post. I enjoyed reading. I was wondering if after giving all those warning, if it's still against the law??? HMM interesting question. LOL
My friend Jim offered to help, but he's in a (friend,)
They spend a lot of time pulling up ,my flowers and vegetables knocking my trash over, (TRY - They spend a lot of time pulling up my flowers and vegetables, knocking my trash over, )
"Let's knock down the old lady". (lady.")
Actually, I don't know their names, So I gave them ones. (so)
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Thank you, I edited. What would I do without you? You are such a good friend. Karen
Comment from GoWiSt
"Pie anyone?
Rats" Well, not if made from rat meat, thank you.
"I have trouble remembering things." Now she tells us.
"I have swiss cheese for brains." Kudos for facing up to your reality.
"dig a hole to bury Walter. No matter dragging him through the yard, or lifting him into a wheelbarrow." Surprise, surprise, another 'man' bites the dust at this author's misandrist hands.
"out come Adolf, Joseph, and Vladimir." Oh, such soft, gentle, cute names.
"took my poisoned pie off the garbage can and began eating it with his fingers." Oh, well then this idiot deserves to go.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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"Pie anyone?
Rats" Well, not if made from rat meat, thank you.
"I have trouble remembering things." Now she tells us.
"I have swiss cheese for brains." Kudos for facing up to your reality.
"dig a hole to bury Walter. No matter dragging him through the yard, or lifting him into a wheelbarrow." Surprise, surprise, another 'man' bites the dust at this author's misandrist hands.
"out come Adolf, Joseph, and Vladimir." Oh, such soft, gentle, cute names.
"took my poisoned pie off the garbage can and began eating it with his fingers." Oh, well then this idiot deserves to go.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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It was an applejack pie, with one "secret" ingredient. I thank you for the read, even though I am still behind with my reading. My muse is making me loony. Okay, loonier. Is that a word? Thanks. Love to you and yours. Karen
Comment from Brenda Strauser
Hi Karen. You have such a great imagination. I enjoyed your poem. Especially Walter. Well written and descriptive. Great job. Love, Brenda.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Hi Karen. You have such a great imagination. I enjoyed your poem. Especially Walter. Well written and descriptive. Great job. Love, Brenda.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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I don't know where these things come from. I can start out to write a deep dark horrid story, and wind up with the Jerry Lewis! Thanks for the read. Love to you and yours. Karen
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Congrats, Karen, on your 300th post! My Goodness, they're mounting up. I don't think I'm even a third there. Anther wonderfully vengeful and imaginative story, clearly expressed and in that style of stream of consciousness which suits you so well. Thanks for sharing, Debbie
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Congrats, Karen, on your 300th post! My Goodness, they're mounting up. I don't think I'm even a third there. Anther wonderfully vengeful and imaginative story, clearly expressed and in that style of stream of consciousness which suits you so well. Thanks for sharing, Debbie
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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I sometimes feel I have little control with what I write. I start out to write a devlishly hideous dark and stormy treatise, and end up with Jerry Lewis. A grand icon for one of your magnificent pieces. Just saying.........thanks for the read and nice words. Love to you sweet pea. Karen
