Comment from Aiona

Excellent

What a nice quatern. I like the use of the repeating line in each stanza, as a quatern requires. I saw two typos:

Second stanza, second line: I think you meant "lightning" instead of "ligtning."

Third staza, third line: I think you meant "lightning" instead of "ligtning" again.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024

Thank you so much-I have corrected

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

I thought this was well written. It's so powerful. I was impressed by by how you capture the storm's ferocity and its impact on the night. I could see it in my minds eye. Great job!

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024

Thank you

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

I appreciate that you italicized the repeating line in this poem. I'm not too familiar with the quatern format, but I think you did a good job. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024

Thank you

Comment from RodG

Excellent

There is something mesmerizing about a lightning and thunder storm. You set the scene very well in this quatern and put us there with the Speaker as the storm hits during that winter night. Rod

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024

Thank you

Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

It's like anger when it gets out of control...It consumes the world around us and often causes destruction. When Mother Nature unleashes her fury, the storm does the same thing.
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024

Thank you