Love's Token
Poem 5/7/52 total reviews
Comment from Begin Again
Regardless if our loved one passes and leaves us to face the battles of life alone, we aren't really alone. they will always remain at our sides and the love will always remain.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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Regardless if our loved one passes and leaves us to face the battles of life alone, we aren't really alone. they will always remain at our sides and the love will always remain.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 09-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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Thanks for reading and reviewing zanya
Comment from jessizero
I think you are one syllable short on that second line. However, it's not a 5-7-5 contest, so you won't get disqualified for that. Your poem was lovely. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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I think you are one syllable short on that second line. However, it's not a 5-7-5 contest, so you won't get disqualified for that. Your poem was lovely. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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Thanks for reading and reviewing & syllable count! Much appreciated. zanya