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In Memory of Nomi's Wife, Yvonne

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Posts to let Nomi know we are here for him

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Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi Ulla,
Sorry I didn't see this until today. This is a well done haibun telling us the sad new of Nomi's wife's death. I send my condolences. I like the haiku which shows she is on her way to heaven.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Happy Holiday.
Joan
P S I would like to tell you I just published a book titled "The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry". It is available on Amazon.com and there is a link to it at the end bottom of my profile page. Also you can go to Amazon.com and search Joan Pechter The Interloper.olidays.

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 14-Dec-2024
    Thank you so much, Joan. I'm so glad for your lovely review. I'm not much on the site at the moment. Taking some time out. Happy holidays to you as well. Ulla xcx
reply by dragonpoet on 14-Dec-2024
    You are most kindly welcome, Ulla. We all need time off sometimes.
    Joan
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Ulla, I love your haibun. Great haibun form. The haiku. Smell is a strong sense. It can bring memories for some. I like the juxtaposition of the flower fragrance and eternity.

I have read quite a few poems for Nomi and Yvonne. It's very nice.

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
    Thank you so much, Marival. I'm so glad you liked it. Un abrazo, Ulla xcx
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Our losses are felt deeply and I enjoyed your soothing words here Ulla. Grief can grip us like a vice and your fine poem helps to soothe this path here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
    Thank you so much, Dolly. I'm glad you liked it. Ulla xcx
Comment from F. William Lester
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Nicely said. This is the second writing dedicated to Nomi that I've seen. I wasn't sure what the book was about, and I didn't know other authors were adding to it. I don't know Nomi, but it is comforting to know he has many friends. Thanks for sharing it. Be well.

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
    Thank you so very much. There's so many.powms out there for Nolan. I hope you will read some of them. Ulla:)))
reply by F. William Lester on 12-Sep-2024
    You're welcome. I've been reading them. Well done.
Comment from Sugarray77
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Hi Ulla. I hope you are enjoying a happy day! Your well-written haibun will definitely be special to Nolan as he grieves for his wife. It is a lovely tribute and a creative write to send his way. Well done, my friend.

Melissa

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
    Hi Melissa, thank you so much. I'm so glad you liked my tribute. I'm so very sorry for Nolan going through this sad time.
    I'm fine enjoying myself. I hope you're well as well. Hugs, Ulla xcx
Comment from jake cosmos aller
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another great little poem an elegy expressed in a hanibun for Yvonne, Nomi's late wife. I like the interplay between the prose text and the short haiku that sums it all up

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
    Thank you so much, Jake. Ulla:)))
Comment from Paul McFarland
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A touch message of condolence, Ulla. I would say that Nolan has a great friend in you. I don't know him very well, but what contact I have had with him has shown him to be a very nice man.

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
    That he is. Thank you so much, Paul for a great review. Ulla:)))
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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Thank you for sharing these beautiful thoughts for Nomi's book. How special it is that we can care so deeply for people we have never met in person. thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
    Thank you so much, Marilyn. Yes, we are a great community, where we get to know each other through our writing. Ulla xcx
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this beautiful condolence for Nomi and his family with us. I know he'll feel the comfort in reading this. When one of our FanStory friends are hurting we all hurt.

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
    Yes, that we do. Thank you so much, Barbara. Ulla xcx
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
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What a sweet poem, Ulla, for our friend Nomi. I hope he feels the showering of support we're sending. I love the yellow tulip and its message of eternity. I think we're all shedding tears for him.

Hugs,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
    Thank you so much Rhonda and for your wonderful review. I so appreciate it. Hugs, Ulla xcx