His Silence
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Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Danielle's brother has really set her on a course to learn more about their family and why he killed them. She is going to have to find out more about Ian Jones to learn more about her family. It might save her from having to move into Oliver's house. Missing a word: . . . leading up (to) the murders. . .
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Danielle's brother has really set her on a course to learn more about their family and why he killed them. She is going to have to find out more about Ian Jones to learn more about her family. It might save her from having to move into Oliver's house. Missing a word: . . . leading up (to) the murders. . .
Comment Written 04-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Thank you Carol, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from lyenochka
I think Callum is right. Danielle should be wary about inviting a nutter like Max into her life. But he might have the information she wants to uncover about the mysteries around her parents' murders and perhaps learn why Harvey did what he did.
I like how you put even the incidental photo floating down - almost like a foreshadowing of Callum's warning to her.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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I think Callum is right. Danielle should be wary about inviting a nutter like Max into her life. But he might have the information she wants to uncover about the mysteries around her parents' murders and perhaps learn why Harvey did what he did.
I like how you put even the incidental photo floating down - almost like a foreshadowing of Callum's warning to her.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Thank you, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I know this might sound a bit obvious but I'd be tempted to go back and see Harvey again rather than this more circuitous route. It just feels as if he's being left out of the picture. Perhaps a comment about why Danielle doesn't want to do this? Otherwise a good fact-filler here and an interesting development. Some edits below. Thank you for sharing this intriguing read. Take care Debbie
in the days leading up (to) the murder
para starting: I find the guy's website...There's an about section?
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
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I know this might sound a bit obvious but I'd be tempted to go back and see Harvey again rather than this more circuitous route. It just feels as if he's being left out of the picture. Perhaps a comment about why Danielle doesn't want to do this? Otherwise a good fact-filler here and an interesting development. Some edits below. Thank you for sharing this intriguing read. Take care Debbie
in the days leading up (to) the murder
para starting: I find the guy's website...There's an about section?
Comment Written 04-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
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Thank you Debbie, Harvey will be making an appearance again soon.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I can't wait for Max to answer, if he does. I hope so. I want Danielle to get the answers she deserves without going back to that house. I am also curious why the police never, well, I'm guessing, never investigated that commune.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
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I can't wait for Max to answer, if he does. I hope so. I want Danielle to get the answers she deserves without going back to that house. I am also curious why the police never, well, I'm guessing, never investigated that commune.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
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Thank you Barbara, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is a fine follow-up to Danielle's visit to the prison and you managed to leave a potential door open for news via the podcasts. I hope that pans out. kay
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
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This is a fine follow-up to Danielle's visit to the prison and you managed to leave a potential door open for news via the podcasts. I hope that pans out. kay
Comment Written 04-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
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Thank you, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Begin Again
Now Danielle might be onto to something. If Max was going to do another podcast on Ian and then suddenly stopped...was there a reason? Did someone stop him? Intersting? Can't wait to see if he responds.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
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Now Danielle might be onto to something. If Max was going to do another podcast on Ian and then suddenly stopped...was there a reason? Did someone stop him? Intersting? Can't wait to see if he responds.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 04-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
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Thank you Carol, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from BethShelby
i think it seems wise that she try to find out what she can from this guy before thinking about going back. I don't undertand why her brother would tell someone why he did what he did. You story is something I look forward to reading.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
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i think it seems wise that she try to find out what she can from this guy before thinking about going back. I don't undertand why her brother would tell someone why he did what he did. You story is something I look forward to reading.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
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Thank you Beth, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from BethShelby
i think it seems wise that she try to find out what she can from this guy before thinking about going back. I don't undertand why her brother would tell someone why he did what he did. You story is something I look forward to reading.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
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i think it seems wise that she try to find out what she can from this guy before thinking about going back. I don't undertand why her brother would tell someone why he did what he did. You story is something I look forward to reading.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
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Thank you Beth.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Oh cool, another development. Danielle lets us in on a podcast that was done on her family, and focusing on Ian, who she thinks might hold some answers to what happened to her. She certainly, at this point, doesn't want to move back to the community, which, I think, wise.
Great job, would love to hear some feedback when you respond.
Take care,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
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Oh cool, another development. Danielle lets us in on a podcast that was done on her family, and focusing on Ian, who she thinks might hold some answers to what happened to her. She certainly, at this point, doesn't want to move back to the community, which, I think, wise.
Great job, would love to hear some feedback when you respond.
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment Written 04-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
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Thank you Rhonda, I'm really pleased that you enjoyed it.
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You're welcome.