The Dance Inside
The right music can put you in your own world.8 total reviews
Comment from Begin Again
I loved your poem and also your notes. I too find myself getting lost in the music, sometimes for happiness and some times because my heart needs to rest. Beautifully done!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
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I loved your poem and also your notes. I too find myself getting lost in the music, sometimes for happiness and some times because my heart needs to rest. Beautifully done!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 25-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much Carol! I appreciate you!
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I enjoyed reading your poem. I love dancing too. It takes me to another world. You did a very good job with this loop poem. It is very detailed. Great job
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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I enjoyed reading your poem. I love dancing too. It takes me to another world. You did a very good job with this loop poem. It is very detailed. Great job
Comment Written 24-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much for the nice feedback! I really appreciate it!
Comment from patcelaw
This is a nicely written loop poem for the contest and I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a wonderful week and may God bless you as you continue to write. Patricia.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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This is a nicely written loop poem for the contest and I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a wonderful week and may God bless you as you continue to write. Patricia.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much for your kind words! I really appreciate it!
Comment from royowen
Yes, a lot of people love to dance, and it's associated with fun. You've written a great loop poem rhymed in abcb with a great rhythm and theme with general tetrameter written, a well presented and a terrific poem, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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Yes, a lot of people love to dance, and it's associated with fun. You've written a great loop poem rhymed in abcb with a great rhythm and theme with general tetrameter written, a well presented and a terrific poem, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much Roy! I really appreciate it!
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Most welcome
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. Sometimes we just have a dance within and need to let it out. I enjoyed reading this entry and want to wish you the best of luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. Sometimes we just have a dance within and need to let it out. I enjoyed reading this entry and want to wish you the best of luck with the contest.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much! I really appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem!
Comment from karenina
The concept of dance seems so fitting for a loop poem! Even the words seem to pirouette as one line flows into the next with the end word of one becoming the beginning of the next...
Many poems in this form seem "forced" but yours glides along as lithely and agile as the dancer within you!
Karenina
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
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The concept of dance seems so fitting for a loop poem! Even the words seem to pirouette as one line flows into the next with the end word of one becoming the beginning of the next...
Many poems in this form seem "forced" but yours glides along as lithely and agile as the dancer within you!
Karenina
Comment Written 02-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
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Thanks so much Karen! I really appreciate your kind review!
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You are very welcome!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I love this. I think you've done a wonderful job of capturing the joy of music. It shows how music can create a space where one can truly be ourselves. The rhyme was natural and the flow I think helped the underlying message.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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I love this. I think you've done a wonderful job of capturing the joy of music. It shows how music can create a space where one can truly be ourselves. The rhyme was natural and the flow I think helped the underlying message.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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Thanks so much! I really appreciate you taking the time to review!
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
What an amazing Loop poem. I'm lucky to get four lines and you got four stanzas. It all was very smooth and none of it sounded forced due to the repetition of words. Beautifully done.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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What an amazing Loop poem. I'm lucky to get four lines and you got four stanzas. It all was very smooth and none of it sounded forced due to the repetition of words. Beautifully done.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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Oh I so appreciate you Marilyn! Thanks for the great review!
