The Colors of Fall
A contest entry17 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
The autumnal colours are beautiful to see each year when the season comes around. A beautiful photograph, Patricia and a lovely, descriptive haiku. Good luck in the contest.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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The autumnal colours are beautiful to see each year when the season comes around. A beautiful photograph, Patricia and a lovely, descriptive haiku. Good luck in the contest.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 03-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much for stopping by my work and they comment.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
This Haiku is lovely in its simpleness. The picture adds to the presentation of the poem. It makes me look forward to the changing of the trees and the coming of all things associated with the Fall months.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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This Haiku is lovely in its simpleness. The picture adds to the presentation of the poem. It makes me look forward to the changing of the trees and the coming of all things associated with the Fall months.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much for your kind review I
Comment from jim vecchio
A very simple message, as all haiku's should be. A nice accompanying photograph. They all combine for a nice image. Enjoy your holiday, as summer gives way to autumn.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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A very simple message, as all haiku's should be. A nice accompanying photograph. They all combine for a nice image. Enjoy your holiday, as summer gives way to autumn.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much for your kind review. It is very much appreciated. I am glad you enjoyed this point.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I have seen the amazing colours of Autumn in America and the they are diverse and the shades are magnificent. Your colourful poem sparkles with the seasons hues, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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I have seen the amazing colours of Autumn in America and the they are diverse and the shades are magnificent. Your colourful poem sparkles with the seasons hues, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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The first year that we lived in Las Cruces, New Mexico, the weather cooled down very slowly and the pecan trees in the mini orchards are turned a bread, gold color. We could drive through The or orchids at almost sunset, and it was so bright. It was almost like it was daylight. Thank you so much for your
Comment from Mintybee
This is a very happy and descriptive haiku about autumn. It's timely, too, as we enter September. I am eagerly awaiting the coming season. I love the colours.
Mintybee
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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This is a very happy and descriptive haiku about autumn. It's timely, too, as we enter September. I am eagerly awaiting the coming season. I love the colours.
Mintybee
Comment Written 02-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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Thank you for your nice review. Your reviews are always special.
Comment from Sugarray77
Hello Patricia. You did a wonderful job penning this exceptional Haiku. The flow of this verse was well crafted and the theme was well chosen. I really enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing.
Melissa
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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Hello Patricia. You did a wonderful job penning this exceptional Haiku. The flow of this verse was well crafted and the theme was well chosen. I really enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing.
Melissa
Comment Written 02-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much for your very nice review.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
As depicted in your poem, the many vibrant and different colors associated with Fall do help the season change from hot summers more enjoyable to see.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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As depicted in your poem, the many vibrant and different colors associated with Fall do help the season change from hot summers more enjoyable to see.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to review my work and leaving a nice comment.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and presentation, Patricia.
-You wrote a good haiku with a good topic.
-Effective seasonal and nature imagery
create a good word picture of fall.
-The colors are spectacular that
you describe in the closing line.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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-Nice image and presentation, Patricia.
-You wrote a good haiku with a good topic.
-Effective seasonal and nature imagery
create a good word picture of fall.
-The colors are spectacular that
you describe in the closing line.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much for your very kind review. I appreciate
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Jacob1395
Autumn is such a beautiful season, particularly when the trees start turning red and gold like you say in your piece. It always does look magical, which is why autumn's one of my favourite times of the year. I really enjoyed your piece.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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Autumn is such a beautiful season, particularly when the trees start turning red and gold like you say in your piece. It always does look magical, which is why autumn's one of my favourite times of the year. I really enjoyed your piece.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much for your very kind review. I appreciate it.
Comment from lyenochka
Yes, the Lord has created the seasons so perfectly and the colors are enjoyed by us because of how He created our eyes to see colors. And each creature's eyes He created differently!
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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Yes, the Lord has created the seasons so perfectly and the colors are enjoyed by us because of how He created our eyes to see colors. And each creature's eyes He created differently!
Comment Written 02-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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With gratitude in my heart and wish to thank you for a nice review
