His Silence
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Comment from Neonewman
Oh! Harvey may have been brainwashed. I wonder if his parents wanted out and Oliver coerced Harvey into killing them. What a mystery. I hope Danielle stays clear of these folks. Ok, this is addicting, Jacob, lol.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
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Oh! Harvey may have been brainwashed. I wonder if his parents wanted out and Oliver coerced Harvey into killing them. What a mystery. I hope Danielle stays clear of these folks. Ok, this is addicting, Jacob, lol.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 22-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Steve, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
I had no idea he wanted Danielle to rejoin the "cult" if that is what it is. Doing that didn't seem like something she wanted to do, but Jeremiah seems to think he is going to get her back.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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I had no idea he wanted Danielle to rejoin the "cult" if that is what it is. Doing that didn't seem like something she wanted to do, but Jeremiah seems to think he is going to get her back.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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Thank you Carol, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Aha, the dots are certainly starting to join up with Harvey very much in control of events in Essex. I like the way he curls his fist at the smallest hint of perceived provocation.There's so much innate hostility there. Also the reminder of The Lion, the Witch and the Wardrobe, so important to Danielle as she hid in the wardrobe.There are a couple of edits below, Jacob, but, as I've said before, I'm enjoying the pace of this story and the way in which you're interweaving important details. Well done! Debbie
Michael, the chaplain (no need for 'the chaplain's name is)
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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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Aha, the dots are certainly starting to join up with Harvey very much in control of events in Essex. I like the way he curls his fist at the smallest hint of perceived provocation.There's so much innate hostility there. Also the reminder of The Lion, the Witch and the Wardrobe, so important to Danielle as she hid in the wardrobe.There are a couple of edits below, Jacob, but, as I've said before, I'm enjoying the pace of this story and the way in which you're interweaving important details. Well done! Debbie
Michael, the chaplain (no need for 'the chaplain's name is)
bel(ie)ve
Comment Written 02-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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Thank you Debbie, and for spotting those edits as well. I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I still believe Danielle would be better off not staying at that house. I don't think it'll be good for her. I have a feeling Harvey was brainwashed and doesn't know any better. Maybe Oliver had him kill his parents. This is another good write.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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I still believe Danielle would be better off not staying at that house. I don't think it'll be good for her. I have a feeling Harvey was brainwashed and doesn't know any better. Maybe Oliver had him kill his parents. This is another good write.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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Thank you Barbara, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Hmm, so we get a view into Harvey's head and the tie he has with Jeremiah. None of it bodes well for Danielle and her freedom. No place could be too good if one is locked in at night... I hope she and Callum get away before it's too late.
Take care,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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Hmm, so we get a view into Harvey's head and the tie he has with Jeremiah. None of it bodes well for Danielle and her freedom. No place could be too good if one is locked in at night... I hope she and Callum get away before it's too late.
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment Written 02-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Rhonda, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
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You're welcome, Jacob.
Comment from BethShelby
I can't imagine Harvey would be released unless he is able to tell someone why he did what he did and show some remorse. He doesn't sound like a bad person. Since the name of this is "His Silence" I imagine he won't reveal his motive until maybe the end if at all.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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I can't imagine Harvey would be released unless he is able to tell someone why he did what he did and show some remorse. He doesn't sound like a bad person. Since the name of this is "His Silence" I imagine he won't reveal his motive until maybe the end if at all.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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Thank you Beth, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Begin Again
Once owned by a cult ...always pat of the cult. It appears all of this is an elaborate plan to bring them (Harvey and Danielle) back into the fold. It's still creepy to me!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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Once owned by a cult ...always pat of the cult. It appears all of this is an elaborate plan to bring them (Harvey and Danielle) back into the fold. It's still creepy to me!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 02-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Carol. I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.