Plucking Petals
Taking the prompt literally3 total reviews
Comment from Aiona
I love poems that rhyme, and this one rhymes. I love poems that make me giggle. This one made me giggle, too. I love the repetitive structure, with the little twist at the end.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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I love poems that rhyme, and this one rhymes. I love poems that make me giggle. This one made me giggle, too. I love the repetitive structure, with the little twist at the end.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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Thank so very much for such a super review. Glad you liked it!
Comment from lancellot
This is very cute. Young love or the beginning of it, can be difficult to understand on both sides. Too much emotion, too little experience.
Good ending
notes:
He said I have a big fat *ss.
*PLUCK*
He loves me not!
_This was a He love me to me. What's wrong?
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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This is very cute. Young love or the beginning of it, can be difficult to understand on both sides. Too much emotion, too little experience.
Good ending
notes:
He said I have a big fat *ss.
*PLUCK*
He loves me not!
_This was a He love me to me. What's wrong?
Comment Written 01-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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Thanks so very much for your lovely comments and review!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed the humour in this post as we have all played this game and you want to make sure it works for you, a fine poem for the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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I enjoyed the humour in this post as we have all played this game and you want to make sure it works for you, a fine poem for the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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Thanks so very much Dolly Glad you liked my humorous approach.