Comment from
jessizero
This was a beautiful poem in just twenty-four syllables. You painted a lovely mental image with your few words. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
Thank you for the read and the encouraging review. Much appreciated.
Comment from
Dolly'sPoems
Twilight at the beginning and end of the day is a magical moment when light either fades and increases and you captured the moment here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 31-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. x