Monique*s Garden
An alluring woman and her garden6 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
Ciao poet, you have your first vote.
A garden full of roses is a beautiful sight to behold but a garden with a woman tending to her roses is even a more captivating picture.
I imagine her humming and leaning forward taking in the scent of one particular rose.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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Ciao poet, you have your first vote.
A garden full of roses is a beautiful sight to behold but a garden with a woman tending to her roses is even a more captivating picture.
I imagine her humming and leaning forward taking in the scent of one particular rose.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, tempeste, for sharing my poem and your vote.
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My pleasure!🙂
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a sweet natured post as we all love a garden full of scented flowers and this gardener has a magical touch that draws in many suitors, a fine post, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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This is a sweet natured post as we all love a garden full of scented flowers and this gardener has a magical touch that draws in many suitors, a fine post, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 31-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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The woman here definitely knows how to garden. Many thanks for your kind praise, Dolly.
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
In 24 syllables you really managed to say a lot! The idea of staying a while after being drawn in by those pleasant details gives a very real sense of comfort and contentment. It's beautiful... a great portrayal of a moment that feels both warm and inviting. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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In 24 syllables you really managed to say a lot! The idea of staying a while after being drawn in by those pleasant details gives a very real sense of comfort and contentment. It's beautiful... a great portrayal of a moment that feels both warm and inviting. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Patty, for your wonderful response to my poem. You just made my day.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I really enjoyed your poem! I felt like I'm right there with you, experiencing the warmth and beauty of the moment. You create a beautiful atmosphere. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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I really enjoyed your poem! I felt like I'm right there with you, experiencing the warmth and beauty of the moment. You create a beautiful atmosphere. Nicely done.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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So pleased I could put you in Monique's garden, Michael. Thank you for sharing.
Comment from pome lover
I would've, too.
Beautiful poem, flowers, and young lady.
And you got all of that in just 24 syllables! wow!
I don't have a 6 left. Wish I did. What's not to like?
Anyway, very good. Best of luck in the contest.
Katharine
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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I would've, too.
Beautiful poem, flowers, and young lady.
And you got all of that in just 24 syllables! wow!
I don't have a 6 left. Wish I did. What's not to like?
Anyway, very good. Best of luck in the contest.
Katharine
Comment Written 30-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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Thank you, Katharine, for your enthusiastic response to my poem and that virtual six.
Comment from jessizero
I enjoyed your twenty-four syllable poem. It looks like you got the syllable count right, and I enjoyed the story you told in verse. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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I enjoyed your twenty-four syllable poem. It looks like you got the syllable count right, and I enjoyed the story you told in verse. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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Thank you, jessizero. Glad you enjoyed this shortie inspired by my own wife working in the garden today.